SteviexOctopus

Hey, it's Stevie here from the Red Ink Emporium. I've got your review fresh off the press for you right here: I love the feel you give off with this ...

Hey, it's Stevie here from the Red Ink Emporium. I've got your review fresh off the press for you right here: Let me start by saying that you have the ...

Warning you now, I am not much of a poet. But I read this and I had to offer some sort of encouragement, because frankly it is really good. I ...

Hey, sorry it took so long to get this review done but you know how life can get sometimes. Any who, I read the other parts and enjoyed them tons, ...

It's pretty good. I really enjoyed reading it. I have a question though: Have you read the Mortal Instruments? Because your story sounds strangely similar... :smt003 Okay so I've compiled ...

Man, your main character is whiny! Yes that was my first thought when reading this. My second was I wonder where this is heading because I expect whiny characters to ...

First off I have to say that this is an amazing piece! No seriously, I loved the idea and the characters, but of course you came here for a review ...

This is pretty good, is this supposed to be a Prologue? Because that's what it seems to be. I don't have much to say about grammar or spelling, but I ...

This is good, but a bit confusing. That might just be me though. The only major thing I saw was that big paragraph, whenever someone new speaks there should be ...

Gosh, this piece makes me want to paint. XD It's beautifully written yet it's missing something, at least in the way prologues go. I think it would be cool to ...

Paragraph by Paragraph : I'm going to start with questions that come to mind as I'm reading it, grammer and spelling mistakes I noticed & sentences that confused me: (If ...