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Re: Hide And Seek
I'm scared of my own eyes, Of what they see, A dismal expression, Or a reflection of me. ~ The things you see at times can be traumatizing! things that ...
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Re: By That Which You Destroyed
Wow, alot of rage huh? I feel this way at times but for some reason my poems aren't very angry and 'Kill you in your sleep" their sad and sorrowful ...
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Re: A promise Unbroken
They can make you fall in love, They can force you to unleash your desires. They can take you above the clouds. They can kill you when coming from the ...
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Re: I'm Not Perfect.
Even all the scars, Cannot stay forever, They too will waste away. Open wounds, can they heal? Yes they can, but only if you let them. You have to let ...
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Re: Blade-Song
Take me away From what they've said. What I got: Words really can hurt, whoever said that sticks and stones bit. Didn't know what the hell they were talking about. ...
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Re: Translucency
This is something I would definitely play on my ipod! I love the chorus I just want to imagine what you would sound like singing it! let our empty eyes ...
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Re: Actions speak louder than words
I really liked this! The feelings the person is feeling I felt them to. Actions do speak louder then words but then sometimes you need to hear things, sometimes the ...
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Re: Who doesn't like drama?
well who doesn't like drama? haha I so get you! My whole family is pure drama! For example yesterday my cousin (who is a HE) was getting loud and being ...
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Re: Life Is...
But others remain constantly dull, perpetual wallflowers. And there's always that unexpected, altering change of plot. People make me feel as if my life is so dull because I'm home ...
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Re: Forgive
Forgive those who cause pain and sorrow, for no one knows what comes tomorrow... this was my favorite line, and yes it is difficult to forgive sometimes, and you even ...
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Re: Prologue: Foreshadowed, just a little bit.
I like this already, it was a catchy beginning and it has a super powers feel well after all they are 'perfect' I wonder how that is going to work ...
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Re: Happy Ending- Prologue
Woah pretty harsh of her, but I'm intrigued! Why won't she marry him? The beginning seems like it could be more, captivating, but I'm glad I kept reading! can't wait ...
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Re: Final Goodbye
Once more you left my life and I'm afraid it was my final goodbye I can relate to this greatly. I had a best friend I've known her since I ...
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Re: Again with the love thing...
This is kind of messed up, the fact that they love them but they aren't together. That stuff is just sad, it makes me afraid of love I've never experienced ...
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Re: Hearts
Close my eyes Shed a tear Heal the wounds That will never heal I really liked this line because it is so true. There are wounds that just don't heal, ...
Sep 9, 2011
