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It was a nice poem
I like the flow the rhyming gives it.
"Forgive the clouds that make it rain,
They spill their tears,
Expressing pain." <-- I liked this stanza the most
"A blade of grass on extending plains," <-- I could see this clearly in my head.
I liked your use of imagery, it was great! Overall a fantabulous poem! Keep up the good work!
I thought this was a nice poem. It was simple but sweet, and there really weren't any major errors that jumped out at me. Overall I thought this was a nice read.
Keep writing,
StoryWeaver
Forgive Is this the title?
…….Forgive the ground: unfertile, dry. we usually say Infertile land, make infertile, dry’ the next line.
…………………we are irrelevent just the same. irrelevant, spelling error
Your errors were few, rhyming scheme,flow and concept was good. Good luck with the future. The poem though stillseemed to lack, imagery and emotion. Emotion was said not felt. Hope this helps.