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The story it self was great but i personally thought that it had a lot of grammatical problems in it, you wrote the story in a scripted kind of a ...

Hey Dylan, how have you been i see you have the second chapter which to me about 15 minutes to review lol the details are in the end so ... ...

i found the start quite interesting, quite a bit feelings were added as forest said but i thought that you were comparing yourself to god himself as a believer in ...

the feeling of death darkly. feet knocking floor. The starting is intense unlike many of the poems on the society this was an impressive and mature start. but i think ...

First of all hey girl hows life, any ways i read your peace of work here quite impressive, a typical American story but i think you had minor grammatical mistakes ...

Hey Daylan, nice to read you story i don't actually review a lot of novelish stories but ill give it a try :D wweeee Sky.Bird.Ocean.Dolphine. Jason has always dreamt that ...

One a day became three, she was upset at me, she hated me. But all of us have our vice and, we don't need your advice and, The and in ...

Ever wish you could start again, Flick a switch, Forget the pain, Yeah i have actually and you seem to have a serious attitude towards pessimism, i like it :) ...

I believe that you cant actually criticize a songs lyrics until u put it into a song. Personally i thought the lyrics were very good nice job btw do you ...

Hey 'babez' you certainly seem to be writing a lot of poetry and certainly one is better then the other, heres a quick review of this one I love writing. ...

Violet eyes were watching me They bore into me and made my skin creep Soft voices crooning me Trying to lull me to sleep The second line seems kind of ...

Hey there im new to the reviewing thing but ill give it a shot :) I once knew this boy with a joyful smile, when he laughed his mouth gained ...

I had to take my guitar and sing it :O i great melody. Do you sing your self? i think the ending goodbye was kinda pointless. over all the thing ...

Try to do as I say As I say it. Breathe in, hold. Breathe in, Exhale. Empty your lungs, and now empty them again. Take in all the air you ...

I wrote this a long time ago but I thought it was okay. It's a little dark, just warning you. We were walking down a midnight road, the stars were ...