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Re: The tragedy of suburbia. a study in absurd.
Hello! Wow this is the first time I've seen the scrip for a play here :) I've always wanted to do so myself but aside from a terrible one act ...
Apr 9, 2020 -
Re: Earthlings for Dummies - Chapter 1: How Easy it Is to be Human
Hello!! Oh my! An alien named Bob! I love, love, love the idea behind this story! I think it just delights me that an alien chose the name Bob for ...
Apr 9, 2020 -
Re: The Sock That Picked Favorites
What an interesting concept!!! I love reading about a missing sock (one of my biggest pet peeves >
Apr 8, 2020 -
Re: I Imagine That
vHello!! I just read your poem here! I love the imagery and companions you use in it My favorite verse is this part here: I am nothing but a rickety, ...
Apr 8, 2020 -
Re: Jazz's story :My first night in the streets (It is just the beginning)
Hey! Love with what you're going for! You have a very interesting entrance and descriptive text here. A few things for you to look out for. The sentence "My Name ...
Dec 29, 2015 -
Re: Déjà vu - Chapter 1
Hi! I came over to see your review once you sent me that PM. Might I also welcome you to the site? I was very active a couple years ago ...
Dec 27, 2015 -
Re: Those Three Kings - Chapter One
Interesting story idea. I would like to know more about the story line here though. The first chapter is about introducing characters (which you did) and introducing the plot or ...
Jan 4, 2015 -
Re: The Legend of the Blackwood Forest
Ooooh, I like this story idea. I can tell that this is just an introduction/prologue or like the excerpt one would find on the jacket of a book sometimes. I ...
Jan 3, 2015 -
Re: Saints.
Hey HighTop! I love the irony in this story you wrote. A man full of contempt for scum of the streets and praising the work of the "Saints" only to ...
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: The dark Void
Hey DreamsRain! Here is the review I promised to you oh so long ago! First thing I wanted to talk about is your punctuation. But I see that it has ...
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: Old version of chapter I
Hi! Stella here to review your first chapter. It seems like you have a great story idea in the works here. A couple points I'd like to nitpick here. Your ...
Jan 27, 2013 -
Re: The Whisperer's Story
Hey! Before I start reviewing I just want to say if you hadn't told me English wasn't your first language I would've never guessed. Your skill is amazing! Now for ...
Jan 27, 2013 -
Re: It Starts 48'
Hey! Before I start I'd like to introduce myself. I'm Stellabeam, known as Stella and not to be confused with Stellathomas. I see you're new here so I also welcome ...
Nov 23, 2012 -
Re: Light & Dark
Sooo, are you going to make this story longer? If you do you will have a phenomenal story, the plot doesn't work for something this short. But I’ll give you ...
May 30, 2012 -
Re: Memories in the Dark
Hey, Hey, Hey! The other Stella here. Isn't strange how we both are reviewing your piece? I saw this earlier today and I was like,"Yes! First review!" But then the ...
May 30, 2012