StealTheWorld

Thank you very much :)

Wow. Thank you so much for all the reads/reviews on my works as of late :) they really help!

Thank you!!!

Thank you very much :)

I hope the changes I made improve the flow. Thank you! Personally, I love repetition if it's used to enhance a poem :)

I really, really, really like this. I can't even review because it has nothing wrong with it. Great job :)

To espy is to catch sight of. :)

To espy is to catch sight of. :)

Your review just made my day. Thank you :)

Honestly? You didn't come off as angry to me. It felt like you were just so in AWE of the writing world that you just had to exclaim it. You ...

You're too sweet ;) thanks!

Thank you so much! It was extremely difficult to keep the rhythm, so I'm glad I didn't mess up too much in the middle. :)

Capitalization is a personal preference. Many poets choose not to capitalize. But I fixed the parts that didn't match up. I don't know why I wrote rooftops. It was supposed ...

It was, in fact, written for the reader. More precisely, for one specific reader. I get that most wouldn't understand it, so I'll just say this: I wrote this for ...

This was a very impressive poem. The language was extremely eloquent. Your word flow was perfect. The last stanza was especially powerful :) amazing job.