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Starleene

  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: ​​​Second Always Comes Last Preveiw: Sir

    Whoa. Can that be my review? Just whoa. That was so beautifully written! I've read a lot of works on here, some good some bad but not many as well ...

    May 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Battle Dress

    Hai there, Cairo! So I read this yesterday, thought I reviewed it, but I guess not. My bad. Well here I am to correct this dire mistake. I can't even ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Whodunit

    Hey there! I literally have one critique. Someday replies Pretty sure you meant "Somebody" since that's his name. That's all I have. But I would like to leave some comments. ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: In Case of Blowout

    Hey there fortis, I am here to give you what little review I can. Pretty much all I can say is that this is awesome. I would never have thought ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Taste the Sorrow - Part one of Ch. 1

    Hai there, Socks! Star here to give you a bit of a review! I really didn't find to much to critique punctuation or grammar wise. These are just a few ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: In the minority

    Hai there Cat! It would be my pleasure to review this lovely piece! Onward: i'm amazed at her beauty. Just capitalize the I in I'm. Really nothing but just something ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Untitled - Intro - Breathe

    Hey Zar! So just a simple review here! Thought I would attempt to clear out some pieces in the Greenroom :D Just behind everything out I'm not sure if it's ...

    Apr 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Black Clouds Chapter One

    Hai there! Star here to leave you a review! (Look at me, I can rhyme!) Onward: while my brother Drew tries to tell jokes If they were talking about someone ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Drama

    Hey there Awesome! OK let's get started! you cook up the roomers I think you mean rumors. :) Just a simple spelling mistake and easy to fix up! Otherwise, I ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: The never ending journey.

    Hai there, Star here to dish out a review! First of before I begin I want to say that this was so beautiful. It was so emotional and it brought ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: red oak trees

    Star here for a review! I think I cried when I read this poem. No seriously I did. It was heart felt and honestly I felt what the character was ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Supernatural Re: The Zombies of Xavier Lane

    Rhydia dear! I saw this and knew I had to review it. In hind sight, that seams pointless because this piece was masterfully written. When I first saw The Zombies ...

    Apr 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Small Fire

    Hey there Skylarembers! Welcome to YWS and congrats on your first post *claps* We might as well jump right in since I mentioned it but don't worry, it won't hurt ...

    Apr 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: I long to catch the ocean

    This is such a beautiful poem I had to read it twice. I'm not to find of rhyming poems myself because many people can't get the beats right but this ...

    Apr 21, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Fantasy Re: Laughing-Stock

    Hi there Fortis! Starleene here to review this wonderful piece! So why don’t we get started? She can make anything a different color than what it is. I feel like ...

    Jun 1, 2013


My spelling is wobbly. It's good spelling, but it wobbles, and the letters get in the wrong places.
— A.A. Milne