SpiritedWolfe

Hi, star! I'm here as requested ^^ Preface: I'm not especially strong with writing/reading poetry, so feel free to take my thoughts with a grain of salt! I'll be focusing ...

Hi, sunlightwarrior! Welcome to YWS ^^ I'm so glad to see you've already posted two works and written 8 reviews! That's awesome . So I wanted to stop by an ...

Hi Omnom Vincian! I wanted to stop by and see what this novel was about ^^ First off, apologies because I haven't read the other reviews too closely, so sorry ...

Hi Patrita! Welcome to the site ^^ Glad to see you've already settled in, written some reviews, and posted two works! This is an interesting piece of flash fiction, and ...

Hi Mea! I'm happy to see you're posting again :D This is out of the green room now so you'll have to post another soon. First of all, I loved ...

Hiiii~ I'm late to the party, I guess! Also, apologies that I haven't read the other fabulous reviews on this story, but hopefully repetition of points is still helpful? First ...

Hi veer! So I've mention before that I really liked this poem, but I never left a review on it, so maybe I can give some helpful thoughts! I notice ...

Hi Harry! I've went through and read the first two parts of chapter 1, but I skipped the prologue (for time constraints, but honestly many readers just skip that section ...

Hi, shieldmaiden! Even though I'm coming into this without the previous chapters, I'll do my best to offer criticism on this section by itself. To start off, I really enjoyed ...

Hi ChesTacos! I saw an Among Us themed story and was quite excited to read it :) So first of all, I feel like this story would lend itself better ...

Hi Vaibhav! The first thing I noticed about this chapter was that it had suddenly shifted from first person to third person. It's not typical for a novel to make ...

Hi Vaibhav, I've only skimmed previous reviews, so I apologize if I repeat any feedback. I noticed your second part was still in the green room, and I wanted to ...

Hi there! I'll jump right into it~ First thing that I noticed was the inconsistent use of punctuation in your dialogue, which made it a bit difficult to read. Here ...

Hi Tazim! Welcome to YWS :) I'll be commenting mainly on the writing of your piece, since I think you have a decently developed idea for your story. The main ...

Hi ducklin! Back for more :) I'll start from the beginning with some nitpicks. The sun was already beginning to sink low and the air was getting colder, as if ...