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For a little story or term knowledge

okay, so A reflect is a mirror version of you who can move talk and everything a human can
only Magicks have reflect's. When a magick is 18-20 they can use the separating ceremony to let their magick out of the mirror. There is a group known as the Rose-robed who when they get their reflect out, the reflect and the magick compete in mortal combat to decide who gains full power of their magic. a lot of people don't separate from their reflect because it gives them advantages in jobs such as teaching guard work and lots others.

Magic is gained from the reflect. Reflect's when gone through the separating ceremony lose half their power which goes to their magick.

all a little background info. The boy Yuharu was born without reflect but could still do magick.
Reflects are treated with respect so are girls so a girl-reflect is sort of one at the top of the respect line.

Regular's are the second-lowest on the respect line to most magicks
the rose robed gaining first

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),

Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!

First Impression: Well this is certainly quite an interesting place to start a story off. It looks like you have quite the world built up her for the story as a whole and there's some pretty interesting questions brought up right in the first chapter which usually bodes quite well for the story.

Anyway let's get right to it,

“I Don't remember much of what happened After the crash, the carriage suddenly ran off the road!” I explained to the guardsmen of the Forestar kingdom.

“Is there anyone you remember being near the carriage, or were there any noises outside prior to the crash”? Asked A particularly tall man in a gold plated guardsman suit.

“I don't remember anything in particular, just the rumbling of the wheels over the cobblestone trail”.I responded.

“Well perhaps you're reflect might know more about this situation, He does follow you around after all” He decided while fooling around with his jacket.

“I Don't think that will help, um you see I can do magic but I don't really have a-”

“Ach! Let me go , Let me go” A girls voice interrupted me. I turned to the source of the abruptance, looking straight across at me from the other side of the mirror was a long haired chick?

“Who the heck are you”? I questioned the girl.

“Hhmm.. incredible what a strange course of events. A Male Magick with a female Reflect?

Well I still have some questions so I will ask you for your answers”asked the man referring to the Girl in the mirror.

“Wait first, l want my own answers”I demanded

“Shut him up” the girl commanded

“Yes Madam” the guard bowed then waved His off-hand at two guards.

“Hey wait no,you don't have to do this!” I protested as the guards closed in and grabbed me.

“This isn't going to hurt a bit” the man started laughing to himself.

“The ride was nice, actually quite pleasant until This Lughead had to pee, he went outside, once the carriage stopped then a couple of robbers came out and lugged him on the side of the head. I didn't see anyone on my side so I guess whoever attacked him didn't have a reflect”she finished with.

(Pee,pee! I never did no such thing!)