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SpiritedWolfe

and i kept walking, even if my feet were too tired to hold me up anymore

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Suicide Blonde - Chapter 6 - Sell Out

    Hello Blood, Wolf here for a review. I really like this, it was beautifully written and I just loved your imagery. So I haven't read the previous chapters, so I ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: The Violist

    Hey clever, Wolf here for a review. This was beautifully written. I loved every moment of it. Everything seemed so natural in it., and the characters, too, were very believable. ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: Final Destination: Chapter 5 Edited

    Hello Tiar, Wolf here for a review. I find this a very interesting concept, and I'm very interested in there this will go. Some nitpicks first: In the first paragraph ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Team World Adventure Episode 2 Part 1

    Hello Patch, Wolf here for a review. I must say this is very well done. Though it is a bit lengthy, and I would recommend splitting it into parts for ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Honeymoon in Mars-Episode12(Destiny's Child killed)

    Hello rikkidas, Wolf here for a review. First some nitpicks: The zombie soldier could no longer bear the disturbance in the cell and opened the door of the cell and ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Sidney's Children: Finding Boyfriend

    Hello Pinkie, Wolf here for a review. I'm sorry to say, but this didn't seem very realistic at all. It didn't make very much sense, because as it seemed like ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Fantasy Re: A Lovecraftian Horror: Prologue

    Hello Jared, Wolf here for a review. So I am not a big fan of horror books or films, being the complete chicken I am. However I did enjoy this. ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Prophet

    Hello imagin, Wolf here for a review. I really liked this piece. The descriptions are beautiful, and I can see every scene very well. I personally haven't heard the story ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 3 - Leaving the Mountain

    Hello Alva, Wolf here with a review. So, other than a few missing or misplaced commas, I don't have any nit-picks (seeing that they were converted previously.) This is a ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Amber's World: Chapter Four

    Hello Christina, Wolf here for a review. I'll start off with some technical things: Amber learnt who everyone was a made a new friend. This was such a glaring mistake, ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Dragon Boy Chapter 1 (EDITED)

    Hello Sunshine, Wolf here for a review. So tiny nitpick: Unfortunately the cons would be ripping through a lot of shirts when your wings sprout from you back as well ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: Broken wings prologue

    Hello My, Wolf here for a review. I'll start off with some itty-bitty nitpicks: ..., how will I know if I like the beginning. Since this is a question, it ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Realistic Re: Part One of The Missing Ones

    Hello Kataya, Wolf here to review. So little itty-bitty nit-picks. I heard Barbara, the representative from Kentucky babbling about how we need to help all the ‘poor’ people in the ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Home

    Hello there, Wolf here for a review! I will start off with a few nit-picks: My older brother Carter was a junior and he was captain of the varsity baseball ...

    May 23, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Realistic Re: Fat, Rolls and Cellulite.

    Hello Faith, Wolf here to review your magnificent poem. I myself am not a poet, so don't take my advice too seriously. If there's something you don't like of what ...

    May 23, 2014


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