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Re: Suicide Blonde - Chapter 6 - Sell Out
Hello Blood, Wolf here for a review. I really like this, it was beautifully written and I just loved your imagery. So I haven't read the previous chapters, so I ...
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Re: The Violist
Hey clever, Wolf here for a review. This was beautifully written. I loved every moment of it. Everything seemed so natural in it., and the characters, too, were very believable. ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Final Destination: Chapter 5 Edited
Hello Tiar, Wolf here for a review. I find this a very interesting concept, and I'm very interested in there this will go. Some nitpicks first: In the first paragraph ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Team World Adventure Episode 2 Part 1
Hello Patch, Wolf here for a review. I must say this is very well done. Though it is a bit lengthy, and I would recommend splitting it into parts for ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Honeymoon in Mars-Episode12(Destiny's Child killed)
Hello rikkidas, Wolf here for a review. First some nitpicks: The zombie soldier could no longer bear the disturbance in the cell and opened the door of the cell and ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Sidney's Children: Finding Boyfriend
Hello Pinkie, Wolf here for a review. I'm sorry to say, but this didn't seem very realistic at all. It didn't make very much sense, because as it seemed like ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: A Lovecraftian Horror: Prologue
Hello Jared, Wolf here for a review. So I am not a big fan of horror books or films, being the complete chicken I am. However I did enjoy this. ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: The Prophet
Hello imagin, Wolf here for a review. I really liked this piece. The descriptions are beautiful, and I can see every scene very well. I personally haven't heard the story ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 3 - Leaving the Mountain
Hello Alva, Wolf here with a review. So, other than a few missing or misplaced commas, I don't have any nit-picks (seeing that they were converted previously.) This is a ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Amber's World: Chapter Four
Hello Christina, Wolf here for a review. I'll start off with some technical things: Amber learnt who everyone was a made a new friend. This was such a glaring mistake, ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: The Dragon Boy Chapter 1 (EDITED)
Hello Sunshine, Wolf here for a review. So tiny nitpick: Unfortunately the cons would be ripping through a lot of shirts when your wings sprout from you back as well ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Broken wings prologue
Hello My, Wolf here for a review. I'll start off with some itty-bitty nitpicks: ..., how will I know if I like the beginning. Since this is a question, it ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Part One of The Missing Ones
Hello Kataya, Wolf here to review. So little itty-bitty nit-picks. I heard Barbara, the representative from Kentucky babbling about how we need to help all the ‘poor’ people in the ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Home
Hello there, Wolf here for a review! I will start off with a few nit-picks: My older brother Carter was a junior and he was captain of the varsity baseball ...
May 23, 2014 -
Re: Fat, Rolls and Cellulite.
Hello Faith, Wolf here to review your magnificent poem. I myself am not a poet, so don't take my advice too seriously. If there's something you don't like of what ...
May 23, 2014
