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Thank you! Yes, it's actually my bunny :) And thank you for the critic! I'll fix that!

Aw thank you so much! :)

Ah thank you for your review, it's very helpful! I accidentally published this haha, I didn't mean to because it really needed some serious work. Thank you for your review ...

Oh my, this wasn't supposed to be published haha. This is an older story from last year that was awful so I unpublished it but I must have accidentally published ...

This is both beautiful, and deep. Keep up these great poems! :)

Oh wow. That was beautiful and I understand those feelings. :) Beautiful!

I love this so much wow.

looovee this!

WOAHHHHH!! Your music is better than Billie Eleish or whatever her name is. I love this and the effects and strumming and YOUR HEAVENLY voice is so perfect. PLEASE CONTINUE

Thank you so much! :)

Thank you! I fixed some things you suggested just now, so if you have time, maybe you could quickly look at it again and tell me what you think of ...

This is brilliant. I love it.

Thank you!

I agree totally with the lines thing, I wasn't sure whether I should do that in case people thought it was like spelling mistakes but yeah I'll fix that. I ...

Oh gosh this is beautiful. I love it wow.