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This was beautiful! I enjoyed the subtle flow and almost rhyming that seem to bring the lines together perfectly. I think so far, this is my favorite poem I've found ...

I really love this, I think for two special points: 1. The beauty and clarity of this poem 2. The deep meaning and the words you used to describe. :) ...

This is a very interesting concept of mixing a short story narrative, with the character's thoughts as poetry. I really like it! The only thing I'd suggest is to just ...

I love this. It's so deep and beautiful, and the feel of it is so flowy and perfect. I have nothing to suggest to fix. I love how you're talking ...

Ohhh this is pretty! I like it :) Just a few grammatical errors such as- A period after the word "fingers" on the second line. Maybe you want to fix ...

I love this so much. It's beautiful as well as relatable to people who love imagining or are creative. I personally feel this poem a lot as a daydreamer and ...

AHHHHH this is beautiful!!!! I love it! The aesthetic, the beautiful rhyming and the picture! Ahhhhhh so good! First I'd like to say that the photo definitely added a nice ...

I do like this! Nice job on the words you used but why is it rated 18+? I like the beginning with the curtain brushing your face and the breeze ...

Ah this is beautiful! So flowy and special. It makes me think of my little cousin and her love for nature. The only problem I have is that I don't ...

This is stunning wow. I really enjoyed the beginning especially, and the second part was very interesting. If you want, I'd be glad to be tagged in the upcoming chapters! ...

Very interesting. Different, and mysterious. I can't tell exactly what is going on, but it leads me and most likely others to want to read more! I like the storyline ...

OK, FIRST OF ALL, THIS IS FRICKIN AMAZING! BRAVO! Now on with the review: This is an extremely and brilliantly written piece of work. Your description, as well as dialogue, ...

This is just astounding. Like wow. You're writing is amazing! Ok, now some points that I love. :) Hildegarde's spirit is something I personally strive towards. She is brave, and ...

This is beautiful. Well written, no grammar mistakes, it captures the mind, and it's unique. The only thing, is that you did mention anything about the glass of milk. I ...

This is beautiful. It's small, quiet and peaceful. I think many other writers will relate to this poem, I certainly do! My favorite line is probably: "If every work I ...