Spideog

Hi, first of all I just want to say that this was really well written and the idea behind it is good. The only complaint is that it is short! ...

Hi, first of all the description so far is really great, you really help set the scene and also introduce us to Aiden yet at the same time there is ...

There is a lovely pace and rythm to this and it is written very well. The ending is fantastic and there is a few captivating images in this too. Overall ...

Hi, this was an interesting piece and I have to say I agree with most facts. One or two I found worded a bit strangely and had to quickly reread ...

This was really good and I think a lot of people can identify with this in one way or another, like falling in love for the first time or learning ...

Hi, I knew we all make typos (especially me, I am the worlds worst!) I just found this a bit confusing and one too many typos. This is just my ...

Hi, this was really good, flows very well. When I was reading it kept coming across as a song/rap but not complaing, it just flowed all together so well. Keep ...