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Re: Dead to the World
MieczAutorski-- Firstly, I want to say that this is a very well-written poem. I like the formatting a lot, and I think the content/themes you have going ion are really ...
Jul 30, 2021 -
Re: Off We Go
AilahEvelynMae-- Hi! Just wanted to say that the content of this story is very interesting. I think that it has a lot of potential, but would need a lot of ...
Jul 30, 2021 -
Re: She's Here!
Alfonso22-- Though I enjoyed the language and beat/rhyme scheme to your poem, the narrative was a bit confusing. A few notes I had while reading this: 1. Maybe some clarification ...
Apr 6, 2020 -
Re: A reflection of uncertainty
Whatchamacallit-- First off, I'd like to say that I loved this poem so much! It's really intriguing, and I'm kind of sorry that you had to put a disclaimer on ...
Apr 6, 2020 -
Re: A reflection of uncertainty
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Apr 6, 2020 -
Re: Perfect
R. Harini-- First things first--I love this poem. Your descriptions are very detailed, and I could see a clear picture in my head. A few of my notes while reading ...
Apr 6, 2020 -
Re: What did we do Wrong ~ A Bullying Awareness Poem
-DogsRule5, RadiantShadow- Hey, I'm here for a review!!!!!! I love your poem!!! it dexcribes completely how someone feels when bullied! I was bullied for over 5 years and all i ...
Nov 14, 2016 -
Re: November 9th
-ChocolateCello- Hey!!! I'm here for a review!!!! Same here though!!!!! I could NOT believe what happened, and i KNEW just from the title of your poem what this was going ...
Nov 14, 2016 -
Re: If You Stand in The Rain
-Alliyah- Hey I'm here to review!!!!!!! I love this SO MUCH! For starters, I love how you use the standing in the rain aspect as a cliché that doesn't really ...
Nov 14, 2016 -
Re: Al Capoem
-Hattable- Hey i am here for a review!!!!! Ok so let me start off by saying that i absolutely ADORE this poem. I don't see any errors, but i do ...
Nov 14, 2016 -
Re: Naive
Hi trashcan123! I just want to say that i totally feel for you and all i know is that karma's a loser and he'll get his one day! As for ...
Nov 14, 2016 -
Re: The Runner in the Sun
15253, I really loved this!!!!! This was fantastic in many ways!!!! I really just love the overall flow of this piece, and how the rhyme wasn't exactly set, like zsmith ...
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: The Ride of a Lifetime
EverWinter, I absolutely love this piece!!!! I love the evolution between the stanzas! How he goes from questioning himself to looking for a reason to live, sees one, and decides ...
Feb 19, 2016 -
Re: When Summer Comes Around
Wyatt16, Let me start with what i like: I love your sensory detail!!!!! And the vocab you use is marvelous!!!!I am in Florida myself, so i know how Georgia may ...
Feb 19, 2016 -
Re: The Forest
myjaspercat, I really like this piece! I haven't read this book, but I really like that you're doing it from a different prospective: a forest! I really don't see anything ...
Feb 8, 2016
