Revised Version of the Poem:
She’s here after long years, but she's still ripe
With bitter altercations, constant strife,
Insulting me up to the hell of a hilt.
She plunges daggers deep into my kilt.
She twists them twice into my tender hide!
I do not whimper for I cherish pride.
I do not dare to utter cringing sounds.
But fearfully keep gazing at the ground.
She’s here, and she is wroth! I writhe in pain.
She’s here inflicting agonies again.
I dare a whimper, but then nothing more,
As she awaits compassion be implored.
She’s here after long years of seeking me!
I try not to remain, but cannot flee.
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