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Re: The last celestrian: chapter one: part three (rough draft)
Well the way it's written is first person and not third so it's hard to explain why she's changing moods fast and the records of someone approached you and you ...
Mar 9, 2017 -
Re: His Name Was Turd
This is funny asf and I have to admit had me rolling.
Jan 13, 2017 -
Re: A short essay about things in life I've learned
Hey I wrote this as I was talking to my best friend and he was like put it in and just think as you write or ask for more and ...
Nov 18, 2016 -
Re: I can't find happiness
It's just depression man so don't worry cause you know what I'm better now then when I wrote this so it's good now and I might need to take this ...
Nov 15, 2016 -
Re: Insecurity and my thoughts
Very true and honestly she hates her ex she's only with him cause her family makes her be with him cause of the baby between them
Nov 14, 2016 -
Re: Insecurity and my thoughts
I hate this world slouch cause I found out it was her ex that made her dump me not her father
Nov 14, 2016 -
Re: Insecurity and my thoughts
When I wrote this I had a bad feeling like she was cheating but I found out it was worse cause I got dumped and not by her own free ...
Nov 14, 2016 -
Re: Insecurity and my thoughts
So line five is a lil discriber for you so you get what's going on in the relationship at the time but now I'm single so yea.
Nov 14, 2016 -
Re: Insecurity and my thoughts
I kinda wrote this feeling like something bad was gonna happen and the bad thing was I got dumped but that's in my next poem for you all to read ...
Nov 14, 2016 -
Re: Insecurity and my thoughts
Thx but she broke up with me a couple hours ago and I had to write something's hopefully you read it and see it cause it's mostly true
Nov 14, 2016 -
Re: The other two
True but it's more of a multiple personality poem and it doesn't bother me for punctuation
Oct 2, 2016 -
Re: I don't understand
And no I kinda wrote this for anyone who wants to comment and help me see a lil to what is happening to me
Sep 30, 2016 -
Re: I don't understand
It's not a poem it's whatever
Sep 30, 2016 -
Re: I don't understand
It's not a poem it's kinda whatever and thank you
Sep 30, 2016 -
Re: I don't understand
No I posted it under other
Sep 30, 2016
