Spartan118

You're welcome and I honestly thought it was about a tree as if you compared a tree to a person it honestly sounds like it's about a tree

Well I didn't see it so yea and sorry if I thought it was for class tho it could be later on.

What i mean is you should have combined with the previous part and if you weren't going to at least take out where she saw the child and put it ...

You're welcome

Listen to me try to drink less and get rest it will help you

Thx and I know about them but depression doesn't help when writing in my case

Thx and I will

That's the point this poem was made with both sides in it cause that's how I truly felt when I wrote it cause it's like ok I'm here now what ...

Thx

Thank you and this isn't a poem more like something I wrote. And I am just kinda there for my birthday cause again it's just a number to me.

The first line is capitalized cause I hit enter each time so no I didn't just went with it kinda it's a just deal with it thing. And honestly this ...

That's why rough draft is in the title cause I am still working on how it develops later from some comments about what I should change or add

Never mind it's in part two it's when he meets sam

Ok I gotta to add that but I think ill add it in the next part before I forget

I think I deleted the name it was in the first part of my memory serves correctly