Sourdude16

Good work yet again. A lot of the good things I said still stand. The plot is still well made and shows a good story plot. I also like how ...

As I said before, great writing. The text has good flow and is well written. The dialogue and thoughts are realistic and move along the plot. The plot is also ...

Great story. I like how you gave an inside view of a person with supernatural powers. Nice flow and thought process. The story feels real and as if it were ...

Nice writing. The reading was a little boring, but was a new subject used in writing for me to see, so I still enjoyed it. There were small typos, like ...

You gave me a review a while back, so I figured I'd return the favor. This is a nice small poem and has a nice, yet short, structure. The subject ...

Great poetry. I like this poems design and imagery. The reading is smooth and fluent and well done. The classic aabb rhyme scheme always looks nice in poetry. The imagery ...

I think this is a good post. I like how you make the reader think and how the view makes a person remember some of the crazy things they thought ...

Terrific ending to the story. I like how everyone survived in the end and how she killed the lich. The lines "My pen-knife was a flash of silver as it ...

This was a great story so far and a pleasure to read. I love how you turned the normal "boogeyman" and monsters childhood scares into a new and creative way. ...

Great story. I geniunely enjoyed it. I love the creativity that the story shows and that you gave it a decent ending. The story is definately worth writing and reading ...

Great writing. I like how you made a simple exchange of a present into a narrative of how the gift felt. The imagery is amazing and the general idea of ...

Great writing. This is a new way to see someone put voices in their head into words or into a unique work about people who have voices. I feel like ...

Great poetry, I can see emotion in the righting. One negative is a lack of rhyme, unless the writing is going for a more generic original feel. Definitely original.