Soulkana

I absolutely adored this story!! Almost cried at the end it was so sad and touching!!! I really can't say anything is bad with it since I'm not good with ...

Drama

Hi there! Well I must say I truly enjoyed this. The description and emotion in this makes it beautiful to read. It paints a clear picture of the scene in ...

Adriana I think this was very sad but very very amazingly written. I can't spot very many issues with it and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. And I'm sorry O.o. ...

Well Artsy first thing I want to say is welcome to Young writers ^^. Second this was very well done. I enjoyed the emotions and the way you wrote it. ...

Creeping & crawling thru Should be through the darkness. onward ever trudging thru should be through, again the mud. Lost to a world the light and life. deeper into darkness ...

Hey it's Soulkana here! Well first off these was amazing. The emotion and the flow was brilliant. My only correction is the first line which I think the word "runaway" ...

Well Irene I must say that was disturbing but it was very well done. I enjoyed how it moves and how you described everything. I can't pick anything wrong with ...

Hey It's Soulkana here ^^, Well first think I have to say is that I absolutely enjoyed the emotion in this. It was nicely well done. I must point out ...

Again the question came, “are you okay?” I shrugged, flashed a fake smile, and continued walking. In silence. The A in Are should be capitalized because it's beginning of a ...

I absolutely loved this this. Haha. Very creative and hilarious. Can't wait to read more of your works ^^. Good luck. I couldn't find anything wrong with spelling and it ...

I see you, but do you see me? I'm focused on your every move. Seeing you isn't easy, but somehow I'll make it through. The memories I have of you, ...

Rosey points out very good points, Judy. Just remember that us reviewers are here to make you improve. So you can truly blossom in your works. I know of Star ...

Hi Princess haha. I wanted to say wow. I got hooked on this at once. I hope to read more soon

Since I haven't read the other chapters I'm a bit confused. However I got what it was about and say nice job. I really liked how this was written but ...