Published September 17, 2011
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I do believe you two are quite right! I shall fix this minor error right away! Thanks for commenting!
I so loved this!!
It is simple, short and real... It flows perfectly and the rhymes are not forced.
You really did a great job!
This is my favourite part, but I think "runaway" should be "run away", right?
Anyway, congratulations and let us hear from you again soon, okay??
I really want to see it!! Please hurry.
PS.:I'm sorry if anything here sounded offensive, I swear it was not my intention.
Hey it's Soulkana here!
Well first off these was amazing. The emotion and the flow was brilliant. My only correction is the first line which I think the word "runaway" should be split in two. But other than that this was good. No spelling or grammar mistakes from what I can see. Well I can't wait for you're other one ^^. Well I wish you luck =)
Sincerely,
Soulkana<3