Soulkana

This is very good. This idea is very curious and interesting. Your descriptions are very detailed and give me a very clear picture in my head. I hope to read ...

Do you know the storms that reside in my heart? Are you there amongst my struggle, as I am taken away and torn apart? Can you see the hell that ...

Good job sister!! Am happy you updated and Keep up the good work!!! The description and emotion in this really inspires me haha. Hopefully you will update again very very ...

All I say is to cap your I's and that is all I have to correct. Other than that there is good descriptions and very deep emotion. Good luck and ...

This is very good!! Good descriptions and the emotion is very vivid. You did a good job with this and I can't wait to read more of your works. I ...

This is amazing and beautiful. It is also very sad and inspiring!!! I'm speechless and it makes me want more and more Please Update soon!!!! You did good I just ...

Good job Tylyn its beautiful and very dark. But that's a good thing it makes it very amazing and wonderful. I loved this and I can't wait for you to ...

Good job with this!!! I really loved it and it had a lot of descriptions and that made it clear in my head. You used a lot of emotions as ...

This gave me a very vivid picture in my head which is awesome!!! Good descriptions I just had trouble with the capitalization but other than that I didn't see any ...

I really like this. Very inspiring and Descriptive!!! I can feel the emotion and dedication you placed in this!!! I love it and can't wait to read more of your ...

Good poem!!! I really loved the emotion and description you guys put into this. I was confused by the rhyme but other than that I really loved this. Hope you ...

This is really great and I can feel the emotion you put into this amazing work. I also can see the time you put into it. This is very descriptive ...

This is a good poem and very deep. Good luck and I hope to read more of your works soon. There is a lot of description and feeling in this ...

I really like this. It has good descriptions and also good Great job with that. i couldn't find any spelling errors at all. Good luck with this and hopefully you ...

Hmm this is interesting and I can't wait to read more. Good luck!!! I couldn't find any spelling errors. So that's good. Also you have good descriptions and emotions in ...