Sorsha2

hello - thanks for the review. In answer to your questions: Is Kydia human? If not, why would another world be speaking in Japanese? That would be highly unlikely, considering ...

Hey Ashley & Alltime Thanks for your reviews. As of Monday I submitted this the agent I've been scoping out for the better part of a year (eeep!) So, fingers ...

Hey Ashley & Alltime Thanks for your reviews. As of Monday I submitted this the agent I've been scoping out for the better part of a year (eeep!) So, fingers ...

Awww thanks Ashleylee. I appreciate the constant support. :)

Sounds way familiar, Hellsing perhaps? Huh??? I have no idea what you're talking about. Either way, I appreciate the review. I will keep your pointers in mind for future. Cheers.

Thanks hun :) I can always count on you for a thorough review! You're awesome! Thanks again - and I am really glad that you're enjoying this piece.

Hey Ashleylee, sheesh you move quickly :) lol One thing I thought I should mention, most of this book has already been written, I am just copying and pasting from ...

thanks blooming phoenix

Again Ashley, Thank you so much for the rave reviews. Fifth chapter will be up shortly :)

hello ashleylee - wow you've been busy eh? LOL Again, thanks for pointing out the errors. As for your question: The only part that kind of confused me was the ...

Hello Ashleylee Just a few answers to your questions: She's going to wait hours in a creepy wood to head back...? Umm, if that were me, I would be beyond ...

Hey Ashleylee Thanks for the wonderful review :) I am sooooo glad that you are enjoying the chapters. I will make the necessary changes to this chapter (although I tend ...

Faithe, Scasha - so sorry it took me so long to get back to you both. Thanks so much for your indepth reviews!!!! I will be sure to make any ...

The rest of Chapter three It amazed Sorsha to see just how quickly the weather changed in nearly a blink of an eye. The sun had long since disappeared behind ...

Hey Bishop, Thanks for the comment. Actually, the Detective doesn't really become the 'hunted', at least - not necessarily in the context I think you mean and not for very ...