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No problem! You deserve featured. :)

Thanks so much, Chips. That means a lot. :)

No problem! I look forward to what you'll do with this!

Thanks Rurouni. I was aiming this at foreign poverty, and although I do know there are people in need in the U.S., it is a fact that they have more ...

Thanks so much! :)

Thank you! I'm glad I could get my point across. I hope this spurs people on to make a difference in the world. :)

Oh, thank you so much for the points! That was a silly mistake, saying it was pentameter when it's really tetrameter. XP Thanks for pointing that out!

Thank you!

Thank you unknown! :)

Ohhh okay I get it now. I was thinking that she just needed pain to make herself cry, but that makes a lot more sense. XD Welcome!

Great, glad to hear all that! About that one quote, I think it is a typo. If you meant "blood and grime", right now it says "ground in grime". Otherwise, ...

Yesss, thank you for this lovely, truthful poem!

An "X" represents a kiss. Like XOXO.

Thank you! I would love to read this as a smash poem sometime, it definitely has that feel. Thanks again! :)

Thanks for the review! The lack of capitalization/ punctuation was intentional. I felt that it added more to the sense of sadness. Thanks again!