Someguy

I love the rythym and the flow. It was fantastic until you got to the last stanza. You need to fix that last one.

I love rythym and the flow etc. I think it could use a little bit of work though. Overall it was nice

It is nice and it rimes. I think it had to be a little bit longer. You should've extended it. Overall it is a nice and different sort of poem.

Really nice. I love the beat and rythym. There is something happening in this rap song. You should've posted it by lyrics. I love the ending! Really good.

It is only two lines,but there is so much in it. I really liked it. Very nice.

This is tough. A name. Here are a few: Hear me Unbreakable love Take this pain away It is something so yeah. Really nice rhythm. Well done

Steamy :lol: Really intense. Poor girl. Very nice. It din't realy go with the flow but I'm not the best poet in this site so... Very nice

It was very short. Not bad, but very short.

It isn't bad.I am a bit confused though.

Really nice. It is a great beginning. A bit confusing but still good. I think you're on to something. It looks like a good beginning and if it continues, I ...

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!! *gets Japanees samurai sword*

It is easy for now. So that the people get the hang of it. Wait a while, I will test ya :twisted: :twisted:

No, this is a song that is on a CD or on MTV. You need to guess what the song's name is. For example: I post a song from Muse ...

Right... I'll tell you at school.

Really nice. Again,I have to agree with snoink. Really good