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Don't worry we weren't going to argue, we were just chatting, and we didn't argue anyway, did we? So relax, it's okay. =)

Just because you did not outright say it does not mean you didn't bring in intothis... And why is it everytime I'm on, you're on? That's so wierd and coincidental. ...

It has a nice message, I agree, but didn't seem very poetic in the sense that you tried to make it a true poem. It sounds more like a quick ...

Branden, leave religion out of this, you cannot critique a poem because it offends religion. If you don't like it, don't read it. Simple as that. Other than that, I ...

Snoink: Aunque creo que te guste mucho, no me parace que esa frase fue escrito bien. Lol, just a joke... I never thought that phrase was proper grammer... Anyhoo... I ...

LOL Hialrious, that bit about cats and dogs mating left and right... LOL reminded me of when my dog tried to do it with my cat... Oops, did i say ...

Hey, not bad for a beginner... In fact, pretty good! And too true...

Purely awesome... I love how you mentioned cotton-burns and all of those other incredible images. EXTREME KUDOS!!!! And a chocolate-chip cookie for you too.

I thought it was.. Uh.. Written purely of and with cliches, and you could've one better than that. I agree with your point however, some of the lines have been ...

I absoloutely loved it... Although some people think the phrase "All that jazz" sounds a little out of place, I loved it there. I also loved the part of elliptical ...

okay, lol: Zzap: I don't know if he's a "Handsome" man in blue, but I'll leave that to the reader's imagination... Lol.... bubblewrapped: I see what you mean, I think ...

Thank you so much! (The third stanza is my favourite... why? I have no clue....)

I agree, I can't stand blank pages. I see one, and I have to put something on it. Chevy, I meant that when a paper is just left there and ...

I like the colors and the way they stand out. If i were to cut everything that came after the third stanza it would be unfinished, and there is no ...

It's not that I didn't want commentary, in fact i'm pleased people actually took the time to view it, but it does annoy me when people have nothing but negative ...