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Actually, I really like this poem. I think it is fine the way it is. Also, I have been trying to convince people that poems are your own creations, don't ...

This is an AMAZING poem. It is so rich in our innate desires to love and make love. I felt like I was by a raging fire back in the ...

Wow! Seriously I really liked this poem. It seems very magical, and mystical. I almost felt like I was reading some old spell from an ancient tome or something. It ...

I really enjoyed your poem for 3 reasons: 1) I love Africa. I think it is an amazing place, and beneath all its trouble and conflict there is an extreme ...

Hello KnightlyAngel09! Your poem is very beautifully organized. Instead of a young girl blossoming, I pictured an almost deity like goddess. I constantly pictured something like Gaia, being the absolu

A very pretty peice of work! I am thinking you are trying to explain the the dividing line between truth and lies (reality and fantasy?). That it is wonderful living ...

I was looking for a somewhat philosophical poem, and come across this one. Sprung from a very wild almost religious mind! Very wonderful! Explaining the deep and innate need for ...