Sohini

[quote="Kajal Lahiri"]This was the only unread Sohini work I found. Wonder why you have left it out of your book. This would have been a good one. [/quote] :( GOSH!!! ...

your poems send a nice message. theworld right now needs it. great job.but you could have a positive title. merry christmas.

this poem rocks! really well versed with so simple slines!!

inspired by Roald Dahl's grammatizator? i found it hard to get too. the flow needs to be worked upon. and be abit more clear.

a magical and enchanting poem. you can really capture the old-world/ middle-earth charm in you words. and as always, short and sweet! you should reallly come up with a book ...

a nice start to the world of Poems. YAY! anicely written poem with a strong meaning too! Cheers to that! but shouldn't it have a better title?

i think the poem's first two stanzas are really well done and maybe you could have written more like those. the third stanza doesn't make much sense to me it's ...

as great and enchanting as always...your poem and the moon..

!!!bingo!!! *wonder why it took me so long to figure that out*

i loved it!1 how do you do that? it's truly enchanting-the blurred pictures are sooo charming. WOW!!!! great work- you're a genius!

that's the most unique poem i've read....grand writing. excellent work!!

hey, i like this poem i think you chose the words very nicely and uniquely. maybe you could shorten this line somehow: "Lying in a sweet summer blanket" short and ...

grand poem, you have really written it with much feeling. i love the mood of the poem and you should add some punctuations. i likes the short simpla and straightforwadness ...

Yay! Big Sis likes Pratchett too!! don't love Detritus the troll and Carrot?? i love those two. Detritus is charmingly stupid, stupidly charming and he's amde of rock, what else ...

yep! thanks. *wonders why she likes thanking poeple*