Sohini

thank you; even i don't thinbk this poem has anything else than the atmosphere!!

Exotic poem. It’s short and sweet.

thanks for the tips. cute avie

oh no the "year" is supposed to be "iar. this isn't really the kind of poem i write-i wrote this in a poetry contest where they gave us a topic. ...

Jojo-you are tooo lazy! shouldn't you know the book by heart by now?(should i tell your mother??)

thanks a lot. hey, i really want to read (and maybe write) a poem about peas!!

Its touching and the nostalgia seems so strong.the writing style is very mature yet friendly. Ilove the descriptions and the feelingsof the little girl.

Enchanting-I loved the mysterious aura around the boy. Well written and I liked the different feel about the theme of this poem. Iloved this line- “All within a glass orb.”

is thos a bit shortened from the original one?? it's really well written and of course it's hilarious. {i humbly apologize for unknowingly insulting you in "About the Authors"-o lord ...

thanx.

philosophical but nice. quite thoughtful.

wondreful. really well written it has a magicall effect.i loved this line very much-"day threatens to invade the night."this line was very thoughhtfully written.this poem reminds me of one i've ...

short and very sweet. does your name mean somethiing related to the moon (as in a Hindi word??) i'm really curious.

thanks a million everyone snoink thanks for pointing out my mistake

thanks a lot