Sohini

You seem to have a big problem with putting commas and other punctuations. The 1st paragraph should correctly read: “Stella stood; her face red and moist from the many tears ...

Hey you avatar is sooooooooooo cute!!! Anyway let’s get to business. I read this story and I found quite a lot of typing and other errors. You might edit this ...

Sorry, but I didn’t quite like this story. I think it’s too complex with so much memory- plunging. Don’t be mad at me. There are some things I’d like to ...

I didn’t read the recent story cuz it is in parts but I’ll read it too. This is pretty nice-a different theme from what I generally read. I’m not a ...

Hey Searria, the story is really amusing and I simply love the last line of the story! The conversation at the end was also pretty funny; did it really take ...

A new writing style and its quite good. There are certain very minor mistakes in this like: Downheartened isn’t a single word-space them. “leave a vain impression” shouldn’t it be ...

eldest is one best books in fantasy genre i've read recently there's absolutely no point in comparing it with the TLOTR series though inheritance makes a much frienldier read than ...

glad to know that evvryone likes tlotr movies a 10000000 times and much more than hp movies. hp movies gives a bad impression to the books, someone persuade peter jackson ...

It looks like a mixture of lord of the rings, potter and the rest of the kind. Anyway it’s nice and when’s the next chapter coming?? i like you ideas. ...

you and i share the same avattar.i,m obsessed with cats-really crazy about them!are u??here's what i think of your writing: :wink: Fantastic! Touchy writing for fantasy-lovers like us. The first ...

It began SUPERBLY but the ending did'nt work out that well. the first two stanzas were very strong and i can really relate it to myself at times though i've ...

remember me!!?? you liked my name! :lol: about youp poem i agree with timjim77 and i dont understand Spanish. :? :? i didn't get the entire theme of the poem, ...

really offbeat 8) loved it. great writing style. do u really eat worms!!?? :lol:

great work. your narrating ability is fantastic.this poem was short and sweet. the poem comes as pictures to me. :) :)