SoggyPoptart

You noticed the silver bellied beasts that purred smoke, gleaming sun rays out their eyes as they sped by you, ruffling your hair. Let me just start off by, this ...

To me, the beginning of the book was really good. I got into it easily, after that the book became so difficult to get into. Yeah, I understood everything that ...

Burn in hell, Internet Connection. AHAHAHAHAH :D That is too good! You are amazing! Sorry, I know this review is completely pointless. :D -Soggy

The selfishness of us humans doesn't have limits, How ironic yet so frightening, today I am crying for her, I don't see that sparkle anymore that urge to leave; she ...

Oooh, this was really good. Now I'm not the grammer police or spelling nazi but this was really good. You took a lot of time on this and that's what ...

Hey, my little angel In Mommy's womb The world is amazing you will see it soon You're my pride. Your my joy. You are my, my whole world And I ...

Oooh, nicely written. Although, I have to wonder who are "they" why can't we control them? How do they work? You know every poem has a story whether it's real ...

This is pretty awesome. Just remember that you have to make it a little more realistic. It's sad, yes but so are puppies in the pound. Make the reader feel ...

I actually liked The Lovely Bones movie and not the book, to me it was quite boring and uninteresting past the 100th page. But hey, that's just me :wink: Avalon ...

This petal leaf, beauty has known Fallen to Eden, tree of life The maker’s hand, he has sown Beauty made, ended in strife This be my doing, my wicked way ...

Or have I wronged you without remembering. It happens. There might have been a dead done That would ignite rage against me. Regardless, I am curious why But need to ...

Hey there! First off, I would like to say hello. Secondly, to critique your poem I have to say I'm going to be harsh. Do not fret, I will try ...

And before his last breath has been breathed I hear him whisper "Forgive them father for they do not know what they have done" Beautiful. This is so beautiful. I'm ...

One word:AMAZING!!!! :DDDDDDDD Sorry for the caps, but this is actually very good for a trailer. Mine would be me actually filming it with geeks wearing boxes on their heads ...

600 wires an hour, 6600 a day, fingers breaking like circuits, like ripples over the reflection of the moon. Beautiful, wow. This is pretty interesting. Sadly not to be rude ...