Published November 10, 2010
Dear sir or madam,
the reason for this letter
is to ask why you hate me.
Don’t get all protective,
it’s alright if you do.
I hate myself as well,
as do many people I’m sure.
However, you act like you do,
so I’m going to assume you do.
I am curious though
for what reason do you hate me?
Is it what I say?
Do you despise the words
I say, for lack of wit or intelligence?
Or is it the way I look?
Is it my face you hate
or perhaps my clothes or skin?
Or have I wronged you
without remembering. It happens.
There might have been a dead done
That would ignite rage against me.
Regardless, I am curious why
But need to know if you do
Indeed hate me. Because then
I must hate you by default.
Sincerely
Mr. Chaos
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My favorite part. The whole entire "Or have I wronged you without remembering. It happens." Although I do believe you should make it a question since you do not know why they hate you. Remember that commas are you friend! (: Just saying I really like this because it is written as if it were a letter. I think that was very creative of you. By the way, I like your username... Just sayin! Good luck and keep writing!
-Soggy
Other than that, this was a pretty good poem. I loved the emotion behind it.