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SofieR

  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Enoch

    This is great. Super interesting and it grabs your attention right from the start. I really love the choice of using "you" the way you did, making the reader the ...

    Oct 5, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Literature Re: Peer Pressure

    You know, I feel like peer pressure gets a bad rap a lot of the time. When I was in high school, I fell into a small group of friends ...

    Sep 9, 2018
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: The Runaway

    Hey there, Sofie here with a review! You've got the makings of a nice piece here. I really the structure of the plot and all the twist and turns you ...

    Sep 9, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Film, General Re: Narnia and Back to the 2000s

    Sorry in advance, because this is going to be more of a reaction than a review, but wow. Oh man, I definitely feel this article in so many levels. I ...

    Aug 5, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Some dreamer's stuff

    Hey Loane! Sofie here. This isn't going to be a review so much as just a general response, so apologies for that. Firstly, I just wanted to say how impressive ...

    Aug 5, 2018
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, General Re: *deleted*

    Hey there toxicunicorn! Sofie here with a review :) This poem is short, but I think it packs a strong punch. The imagery you use here ("Red Splatters" "razor's bite") ...

    May 11, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: We should not be trusted, not even a little, most definitely not a lot.

    Hey there, Camusic! Sofie here with a review :) Firstly, I think it takes some guts to write about current events, or relevant/controversial issues like this one, so major props ...

    May 11, 2018
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Timmy

    Hey there Ladyokra! Sofie here with a review. So, the premise of this story is actually really cool. It follows a lot of great sci-fi themes without being too much ...

    May 11, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Health, General Re: Generation Z's Biggest Problem...

    Hey there, jemming17! Sofie here with a review. Firstly, I want to commend you on picking a topic as important and timely as this one. I think the number one ...

    May 10, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Just A Teenage Mess

    hey there! Sofie here with a review. You know, so many people are so hesitant to say their parents AREN'T their greatest role models. It's kind of refreshing to hear ...

    Apr 7, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Literature, General Re: A writer's mind

    Hey! Sofie here with a review :) So, I love this as an essay topic. I think writing and the writing process is just a super fascinating thing. I was ...

    Sep 11, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Other Re: Inequality Has No Justice

    Hey! Sofie here, dropping a review :) This is great topic for an essay, and very much needed in the current political climate. It read very well for the most ...

    Sep 11, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Rose Without Her Sky

    Hey There! Sofie here with a review :) Firstly, this is was a really nice read. Very poetic, almost like reading song lyrics. If I have any criticism, like Lightsong ...

    Sep 11, 2017
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: His Honor

    Hey There! This was great, and important. We need more writers like you to write and educate us about your culture, especially these days. I hope you keep at it. ...

    May 6, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Rainbow

    Hey there! So, first off, IN THE HEIGHTS REFERENCE!!! I fangirled so hard at that part ahaha. Anyway, for some reason I have a real soft spot for sibling characters ...

    May 6, 2017


Painting is poetry that is seen rather than felt, and poetry is painting that is felt rather than seen.
— Leonardo da Vinci