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Re: Enoch
This is great. Super interesting and it grabs your attention right from the start. I really love the choice of using "you" the way you did, making the reader the ...
Oct 5, 2018 -
Re: Peer Pressure
You know, I feel like peer pressure gets a bad rap a lot of the time. When I was in high school, I fell into a small group of friends ...
Sep 9, 2018 -
Re: The Runaway
Hey there, Sofie here with a review! You've got the makings of a nice piece here. I really the structure of the plot and all the twist and turns you ...
Sep 9, 2018 -
Re: Narnia and Back to the 2000s
Sorry in advance, because this is going to be more of a reaction than a review, but wow. Oh man, I definitely feel this article in so many levels. I ...
Aug 5, 2018 -
Re: Some dreamer's stuff
Hey Loane! Sofie here. This isn't going to be a review so much as just a general response, so apologies for that. Firstly, I just wanted to say how impressive ...
Aug 5, 2018 -
Re: *deleted*
Hey there toxicunicorn! Sofie here with a review :) This poem is short, but I think it packs a strong punch. The imagery you use here ("Red Splatters" "razor's bite") ...
May 11, 2018 -
Re: We should not be trusted, not even a little, most definitely not a lot.
Hey there, Camusic! Sofie here with a review :) Firstly, I think it takes some guts to write about current events, or relevant/controversial issues like this one, so major props ...
May 11, 2018 -
Re: Timmy
Hey there Ladyokra! Sofie here with a review. So, the premise of this story is actually really cool. It follows a lot of great sci-fi themes without being too much ...
May 11, 2018 -
Re: Generation Z's Biggest Problem...
Hey there, jemming17! Sofie here with a review. Firstly, I want to commend you on picking a topic as important and timely as this one. I think the number one ...
May 10, 2018 -
Re: Just A Teenage Mess
hey there! Sofie here with a review. You know, so many people are so hesitant to say their parents AREN'T their greatest role models. It's kind of refreshing to hear ...
Apr 7, 2018 -
Re: A writer's mind
Hey! Sofie here with a review :) So, I love this as an essay topic. I think writing and the writing process is just a super fascinating thing. I was ...
Sep 11, 2017 -
Re: Inequality Has No Justice
Hey! Sofie here, dropping a review :) This is great topic for an essay, and very much needed in the current political climate. It read very well for the most ...
Sep 11, 2017 -
Re: A Rose Without Her Sky
Hey There! Sofie here with a review :) Firstly, this is was a really nice read. Very poetic, almost like reading song lyrics. If I have any criticism, like Lightsong ...
Sep 11, 2017 -
Re: His Honor
Hey There! This was great, and important. We need more writers like you to write and educate us about your culture, especially these days. I hope you keep at it. ...
May 6, 2017 -
Re: Rainbow
Hey there! So, first off, IN THE HEIGHTS REFERENCE!!! I fangirled so hard at that part ahaha. Anyway, for some reason I have a real soft spot for sibling characters ...
May 6, 2017
