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Both names can be used as a girl name or a boys name. And thank you that's kind of what I was aiming for. The whole not knowing what they ...

I personally think you should keep the mine, but I would say maybe change the them to those. I think that it would make the poem flew just a little ...

Oh my goodness, I love, love, love this! It is a beautiful poem and I can not wait until I see more of your work. If you're this good at ...

Wow, this was painfully amazing. I loved this poem and how it flowed just right. The part that said "their expired kin" like sent chills down my back. Ahhhh, I ...

Hmmm, I really like this. It was different and not what I was expecting. Nice work.(:

This is so short that I honestly thought it was going to be kind of crappy, and I would be kind of confused about what the meaning of it was, ...

I really like this piece. It was written simply, as already stated, but it was done well. I do, however, have some problems with the first paragraph. Some of the ...

I really liked your poem, but sometimes it felt like you had to force some of the rhymes, the last line especially. Take what I said with a grain of ...

This is so sweet and sad and just ughhhhh, I love it! You put everything together beautifully.(: it's so nice to see since I'm in the same spot. I can't ...

Thanks lovely(:

Hmmm, I never thought that I would be any good at poems or songs. I like the idea, but sadly I don't play anything. ): As always though I thank ...

I understand about the stanzas, but I wasn't really sure how to go about that for this poem so that is why I left it be. The stop and share ...

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much.(:

XD I like what I write, and if no one else does that's ok. I wanna get better and it seems to be everyone is completely honest here. Thank you ...

Thank you! That's kind of what I was aiming for.(: