SnowGhost

This is great :) I don't understand much french so I used Google translate but the poem itself is very beautiful.

Awesome :) also I think longer chapters work better

It's cool

Oh thanks for mentioning that :D

This is awesome :D

This is really cool. I don't know much french (thank you Google translate) but I myself have writen spanish poems and I think it really cool to write in a ...

The chapter didn't seem too long for me because I was so invested in the story. Awesome job :D

Usually just realistic eyes but sometimes I like to drew manga eyes and occasionally I do drew animal eyes

Guys what if I told you I can read this? Every word of it.

Dude I have a weird obsession for drawing eyes too

That is the best way to write, is through the heart. Also some people write lyrics and turn them into poetry and some people write poems and turn them into ...

Thanks :D

Yeah I've been told that line was kinda forced and I will probably work and changing it. Thanks for the review

Thanks you. And you've definitely got the meaning right

Thank you so so much. I really appreciate that you took time to review my poem. What your saying does definitely make sense