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It's interesting seeing you, who makes a big deal out of the tiniest errors, writing a poem like this. It was pretty amusing. Hehehe... poetry is a little bit more ...

Oh yeah. I can definitely see this in song format. It's not too heavy, but not too light either, and, though a little awkward in the poetical sense, with some ...

Thanks for all the tips and comments! I've edited the poem according to your suggestions, so now it's a lot sparkly and stuff. :) Grif: *eats tiger cub* ;) Sharty: ...

I'm sure you can get better. It just takes a lot of practice though. ;)

*shoots Elizabeth* I think you're either upset over the random poems or you're trying too hard. :P

It doesn't really have a god finish. It just sort of floats away. Maybe you can rearrange your ines so that it feels more conclusive?

Because it's a story about love.

Hehe, that wasn't that bad. Try varying the perspective for additional fun. I want to know what the Empress of all is thinking when she's doing that. ;)

So basically? This is emotionless. XD

...haha... I think I shall have to spork out his other eye.

XD Hahaha... let us vanquish this ghetto gremlin! Who's with me? Oh, and it should be "black-lined." :P

Thanks a lot! :D

You have to go to your original post, click edit, and then you can change the title.

Oh, and rthere is a reason for the murder and stuff, though. Just for people to know, i didn't make it up on the spur of the moment. Thanks :lol: ...

It was very prettily done!