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No worries Tempest! I lubs you. ;) And I don't hate your story, lol. If I hated it, I wouldn't even bother with staying up late and working on that ...

First reaction: EEP! I wasn't playing neopets... honest! Second reaction: Wait... this is in narrative poetry. Weird... Third reaction: *click* Fourth reaction: ...wtf? Fifth reaction: I'm married! So

Lol! Well, vagueness can be used for good, not evil, and in this case it's good. SoIthink it's more of a judgment call, and you just have to be very ...

Haha... he sounds sexy, of course. And yay! I don't think it's possible to fix the last line, but whatever. We get the idea, so it works. :P

Back on topic, please.

Get rid of the colons. ;) *shudders* The colons remind me of rping games my friends and I did... not pretty.

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Obviously, with responses like that. Be constructive, or don't comment. Touché Master Mod, but I was offering an honest suggesion in my mentioning of medication and the like. So sorry ...

so no one liked this? will if my true feelings dont work, i dont know what will :( Awww... that's not it at all! We're not critiquing your feelings... only ...

To be fair, I helped her. XD

this iz teh most aesome thing i've read1 rrite ,more.

Please, only put your original lyrics on this forum. **LOCKED**