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Re: Christianity ( In a Nut Shell)
I have a friend who will rap it for you, maybe. Want me to ask him if he'll do it?
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (1)
First of all, thank you so much! :D I did a couple of edits... 1. Granidid = Granid now. So! More like a rock. :) 2. Mentioned a little bit ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (1)
Wow, thanks for all the reviews! I didn't really expect any! :o Granidid was a name I came up when I was eight. And yes, this story is very, very ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: I Love You
Psssssst. This was written six years ago by a 12-year-old. Look at the dates, people! ;)
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Letter To My Mother
Hey Smiley! So I guess I was a bit vague in my first critique! Here's a video critique, which I am hoping is a lot more thorough than the previous ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: Princess SpongeBob
Pfft! I hope it's not a novel! I do have to judge the bad writing. xD So the madness begins! :D And it's Einstein! Einstein! *twitches*
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: Parallel
Eek! Don't worry! Non-Euclidean geometry is a very special geometry. That doesn't mean that Euclidean geometry doesn't work though! However, Euclidean geometry holds several assumptions, like parallel
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Deleted 5
Okay, try this: take out the adjectives and adverbs that are not ellipses of noun phrases or proper adjectives or demonstrative adjectives. And I'm saying this because it still seems ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: Hate the Lovely
Haha, I figured as much! But see, what you do first is a free write where you just puke out your emotions on paper. Then you start to construct the ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Hate the Lovely
Right now, you need to figure out what is important about this poem and what isn't. You're throwing all these visual cues toward us as a somewhat hodgepodge of information, ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Tell All
Oh gosh... XD Actually, alcohol just gets calmer, so that wouldn't be good for crazy stupid poems. But I think that when this was written nearly six years ago, I ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: deleted for now.
I like the way the poem starts now... much catchier. However, if you want this to be consistent, you have to rewrite the rest of the poem to fit the ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Snoink.net (critiques appreciated!)
Eek, I love you!
Dec 10, 2010 -
Re: Snoink.net (critiques appreciated!)
Er... now I think that it looks like my website is puking with color. XD I updated the nav bars of the main site and the comic pages. So it ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: Snoink.net (critiques appreciated!)
Kitty>> The gray butterfly is actually a moth, that's why he has fuzzy feelers. ^^ And yeah... it does look a bit bare! Meep>> Thanks! Calligraphy>> How rude of it! ...
Dec 6, 2010
