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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Christianity ( In a Nut Shell)

    I have a friend who will rap it for you, maybe. Want me to ask him if he'll do it?

    Mar 24, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Swan Song (1)

    First of all, thank you so much! :D I did a couple of edits... 1. Granidid = Granid now. So! More like a rock. :) 2. Mentioned a little bit ...

    Mar 20, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Swan Song (1)

    Wow, thanks for all the reviews! I didn't really expect any! :o Granidid was a name I came up when I was eight. And yes, this story is very, very ...

    Mar 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Love You

    Psssssst. This was written six years ago by a 12-year-old. Look at the dates, people! ;)

    Mar 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Letter To My Mother

    Hey Smiley! So I guess I was a bit vague in my first critique! Here's a video critique, which I am hoping is a lot more thorough than the previous ...

    Mar 5, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Princess SpongeBob

    Pfft! I hope it's not a novel! I do have to judge the bad writing. xD So the madness begins! :D And it's Einstein! Einstein! *twitches*

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Parallel

    Eek! Don't worry! Non-Euclidean geometry is a very special geometry. That doesn't mean that Euclidean geometry doesn't work though! However, Euclidean geometry holds several assumptions, like parallel

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Deleted 5

    Okay, try this: take out the adjectives and adverbs that are not ellipses of noun phrases or proper adjectives or demonstrative adjectives. And I'm saying this because it still seems ...

    Feb 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Hate the Lovely

    Haha, I figured as much! But see, what you do first is a free write where you just puke out your emotions on paper. Then you start to construct the ...

    Feb 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Hate the Lovely

    Right now, you need to figure out what is important about this poem and what isn't. You're throwing all these visual cues toward us as a somewhat hodgepodge of information, ...

    Feb 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Tell All

    Oh gosh... XD Actually, alcohol just gets calmer, so that wouldn't be good for crazy stupid poems. But I think that when this was written nearly six years ago, I ...

    Jan 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: deleted for now.

    I like the way the poem starts now... much catchier. However, if you want this to be consistent, you have to rewrite the rest of the poem to fit the ...

    Dec 14, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: Snoink.net (critiques appreciated!)

    Eek, I love you!

    Dec 10, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: Snoink.net (critiques appreciated!)

    Er... now I think that it looks like my website is puking with color. XD I updated the nav bars of the main site and the comic pages. So it ...

    Dec 7, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: Snoink.net (critiques appreciated!)

    Kitty>> The gray butterfly is actually a moth, that's why he has fuzzy feelers. ^^ And yeah... it does look a bit bare! Meep>> Thanks! Calligraphy>> How rude of it! ...

    Dec 6, 2010


Even strength must bow to wisdom sometimes.
— Rick Riordan, The Lightning Thief