Snoink

Thank you for your lovely review! :) I considered posting this in poetry too. ^^ But! The story this is based on is the famous flash fiction six word story ...

I sing the "Stay Awake" song in Mary Poppins to get my baby to sleep. Reverse psychology. Gotta love it.

I wish this was longer, just because it's so fun.

Sundays just fly by way too fast, don't they? ;) You misspelled the title, by the way. :P I like the rhyme. It was fun. I like the description of ...

Wouldn't it be cool if I weren't a mod? No one would look up to me. No one would mind, If I had to cry. No one would care if ...

(Now that I think about it... that digression would have probably been better in the Catholic club. :P We can move the discussion there, if you want to, Therese. Sorry ...

You clearly didn't read the story that was posted on YWS several years ago that somebody wrote which shipped me (as Snoink) out with Justin Bieber in a graphic (and ...

Thanks for pointing this out! I never picked up on the gay best friend transition to best friend.

:( This is so sad. Her father shouldn't have just left like that. It's ripped a hole in her heart and it looks like she's been trying to fill it ...

On another note (and this might explain my previous statement more) the abstractness of who is really the victim and who is really the villain is what makes the message ...

It could be read that way though, with the children bit! :o People with children can fall out of love with each other, after all. Your poem is abstract enough ...

Ah. I was a bit confused because you liked the reviews that commended you on the romance part and I looked at the poem and I thought, "I see no ...

Also, this might be helpful. You are guilty of 3, 4, 5, and 10 currently. :P

Yay! When it looks better, let me know! :)

I think someone is jealous...