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I would trim this stanza down, if only to give it more of a metered feel: At even the most hardworking person. It just seems too long.

The title SUCKED. I thought this was going to be yet another long-winded boring poem. Lucky for you, the poem wasn't -- actually, it was quite interesting. It was a ...

Er.... what makes you say that?

Okay! Update! You writers will love this... I'm in the process of putting the tutorials for writing here: Anyway, there's only several tutorials in now, but hopefully they'll be a ...

Oh no, it's perfectly fine. :) We love to see edited work. It makes our job that much better.

Thanks for the comments! Concertchick16: thanks for noticing. That sentence has always been awkward. I'm not sure that your way will work (not your fault, mind you; I was the ...

*whimpers* No red...

Okay! Another question! I'm going to make half my website a sort of homework help center, with scientific essays, writing tutorials, historical research, and every other little thing I can ...

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I don't like the word, "phosphoresce" (which is entirely expected of me, no?) Other than that! Pretty good. Very lyrical.

:shock: Aw, come on, be a pal! Point out the grammar mistakes. ;)

...Never heard of him...

Oh and Ha-ha! I am younger and can use that as an excuse! You know it! ;) But it may not work. I wrote this when I was 13: No ...

Laugh all you want! I was in tears while doing this improvised poem (Griffinkeeper inspired it).

Okay... wait a couple of days for me. ^_^