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Re: Anne Boleyn: Last Moments
Hey Evi! So first of all, I’m going to post my actual grades. Like I said, everybody did exceptionally well, and yours is no exception. What I graded on was ...
Feb 21, 2009 -
Re: Annabel Lee
Hola BBBBBBBBB! So first of all, I’m going to post my actual grades. Like I said, everybody did exceptionally well, and yours is no exception. What I graded on was ...
Feb 21, 2009 -
Re: Harry Cullen & Edward Potter
Haha! You win at life. The Stephanie Meyer vs. JK Rowling was a bit overdone and not as funny, but the whole Harry Potter and Edward Cullen thing was hilarious. ...
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: Elegy for Humanity
Gahks hey! Snoink hola! Gahks alright? Snoink all right what? Gahks are you alright? lol Snoink haha, yes, I am all right! Gahks say, could you do me a favour? ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: To the death: Chapter 1-Part 1
Eek! This is a bit confusing! You're going to want to make it make a little more sense. I love your style because it romps around in a delighted way, ...
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: Recommended Romance books?
Pride and Prejudice, by Jane Austen fact, you really can't go wrong with her, as far as romance novels go! That's just my favorite. I am slightly in love with ...
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: Exchange (1)
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Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: .
You're a hoot! I haven't read this yet. I will, but what the hey! A free bump? Plus, you can't whine about nobody commenting on your work. :P Anyway, gravity ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Sparkle, Sparkle
Haha, this was cute. ^_^ It needs a bit more conflict though... I would suggest adding a sentence that says something along the lines of, "I wasn't sparkly before" and ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: The first taste
Lol, next time, critique other writers' stories and guilt trip them into checking this story out. ;) It's essential to do this, especial if you're a historical fiction writer, just ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: hope amid blinding despair
Hello! :D We had a member near where you live that had the same avatar, so that's amusing too me! :D But you are newish and stuff, so ha! Anyway, ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Fake Heart
Haha, it's in the right forum. ^^ A fake ‘Would you lie for me?’ I never asked that question
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: The Letter
Please do not respond to critiques. If I see any more back and forth snipes, I am locking this thread. To me, I would probably not like this poem, just ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: Free from the Puppet Masters
Haha, if your letters and words can create so much, why create this? ;) This is a bit bland for poetry. I mean, you could talk about streams of words ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: Un-real
Hi! First of all, I rated your work G. So now it has a chance to be on the front page and seen by hundreds of people an hour. Cool, ...
Jan 31, 2009
