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Or! Or! You can do something more awesome! I mean, yeah, that's true, the French doesn't really have to do with anything in the title... but the poem isn't spectacular ...

Okay, first of all, thank you for your patience! It is much appreciated! :D So I gave you a video critique. And, unfortunately, it's not really that great. -_- I ...

Aww... this is a weirdly sweet poem! The first: jagged, raised a deep puncture. The second: twins paralleled across pale flesh. You described the physical attributes of them, but I ...

The reason why people probably didn't finish it is this: It is dull and self-absorbed. I tried to read it, but I really wanted to stop after reading this much: ...

Haha, yes, definitely an interesting style! I like how it repeats.... well, the tick tocks sort of annoy me, but only because I've been dealing with certain mathematical problems where ...

Everything that I told you is a lie This relationship dies. When you get to this point, the relationship's already dead. Has been for a while. Trust is essential for ...

Oy... this poem sounds eerily similar. It is reminiscent of my early poems where I thought style was more important than content and that poetry was meant to be confusing, ...

Haha, meaning or not, you wrote it anyway. ^^ The last line of every stanza is kind of cliched and lame. It would be awesome if you could use these ...

First! Read this: It's a story, but it's an excellent one and it contains quite a lot of poetry. Consider the lines: “I shall now select my Empress!” he said, ...

Haha, we love bumps! :D Okay, so I mostly have questions. Why exactly do you use hands exclusively? I know that a previous reviewer analyzed it, but I think it ...

Oh, nice! ^_^ Just a couple of things: the cadillac can no longer steer it it goes into the river The styling seems a bit too typical here. I like ...

Hello! I haven't done a critique in a bajillion years, so sorry! I'm a little rusty. If I end up being too soft or hard, I swear, it's not because ...

So! Some thoughts! :D (Because thoughts are generally awesome.) In your narratives, you're generally more action-oriented with your description. That is, you tend to skimp on the details and go ...

Okay. I basically ranted about the songs of FREAK and how they correlated to the story, including giving examples and little excerpts of the story. So there are spoilers. That ...

Tangent! So first of all, I’m going to post my actual grades. Like I said, everybody did exceptionally well, and yours is no exception. What I graded on was grammar, ...