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He had killed six people in cold blood. Every child in the town knew the story of Jesse Princeton well. The lone survivor of the massacre had turned the vile ...

Hehe, I'll probably call you up and rant about how awesome this is (and it is pretty awesome in five trillion different ways) but in the meantime, here is a ...

I trimmed 106 words from it. Add to where it seems lacking: **** Silence blanketed our Knossos palace in a dreamy haze. "Seven young men," my husband, Minos, said from ...

Or! Or! You can do something more awesome! I mean, yeah, that's true, the French doesn't really have to do with anything in the title... but the poem isn't spectacular ...

Okay, first of all, thank you for your patience! It is much appreciated! :D So I gave you a video critique. And, unfortunately, it's not really that great. -_- I ...

Aww... this is a weirdly sweet poem! The first: jagged, raised a deep puncture. The second: twins paralleled across pale flesh. You described the physical attributes of them, but I ...

The reason why people probably didn't finish it is this: It is dull and self-absorbed. I tried to read it, but I really wanted to stop after reading this much: ...

Haha, yes, definitely an interesting style! I like how it repeats.... well, the tick tocks sort of annoy me, but only because I've been dealing with certain mathematical problems where ...

Everything that I told you is a lie This relationship dies. When you get to this point, the relationship's already dead. Has been for a while. Trust is essential for ...

Oy... this poem sounds eerily similar. It is reminiscent of my early poems where I thought style was more important than content and that poetry was meant to be confusing, ...

Haha, meaning or not, you wrote it anyway. ^^ The last line of every stanza is kind of cliched and lame. It would be awesome if you could use these ...

First! Read this: It's a story, but it's an excellent one and it contains quite a lot of poetry. Consider the lines: “I shall now select my Empress!” he said, ...

Haha, we love bumps! :D Okay, so I mostly have questions. Why exactly do you use hands exclusively? I know that a previous reviewer analyzed it, but I think it ...

Oh, nice! ^_^ Just a couple of things: the cadillac can no longer steer it it goes into the river The styling seems a bit too typical here. I like ...

Hello! I haven't done a critique in a bajillion years, so sorry! I'm a little rusty. If I end up being too soft or hard, I swear, it's not because ...