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AHHHHHHH. This is so funny. I love it. XD Okay a couple of really little things I think you can improve on... => The Title!!! Your current title doesn't do ...

OMG! I recognized your name from a long time ago! It's good to see you back... especially with new writing! :) So! The origin story of Nawaedghe! Hm... it's very ...

Oh, hello! I see someone else posted their third and fourth chapter on the day before Review Day... ^^;; This makes me feel slightly less guilty, LOL. OKAY SO. Not ...

Okay so!!!! This is a conversation that happens ALL THE TIME in our home and I can already tell you that you need to have interior thought here because it's ...

Oh hello, you prophet! I told you I'd be back, eh? :) Okay, so this chapter was MUCH better than your last one! I feel like you're sooo much more ...

Aet!!! I get really excited whenever one of the old guard come back, especially with new writing, and YOU'RE HERE! YAY! :D Anyway, I had to look at your stuff! ...

WAIT WAIT WAIT. So I was with you when the Queen was concerned about Snow White (totally valid, honestly... she might very well be a vampire if she really is ...

Oh goooooodness, I have so many questions after reading this story! Namely, who is this woman? And why? I sort of want to know her motivation, even if only a ...

Hello! :) First of all, I want to apologize in advance for this incoherent mess of a review. I swear... at least you know it can't be AI because it ...

Hi Lady! :) Okay! There are some definite improvements in some respects and some other (new!) things to think about! So let's dive in, shall we? Improvements: - The first ...

OMG SPEARMINT HOW DARE YOU DO THIS TO ME. 1. THE FLOWER SYMBOLISM AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. By the end of it, I actually reread it again because AHHHH it hits differently and ...

Okay, I realize this isn't put into the Poetry section, but ALSO. This reminds me of what our very own Nate loves to say... that coding is poetry. And I ...

Hi! I'm a Christian woman, and I have to say this is a really scattered, unorganized, unpersuasive essay about modesty and guiding women toward this virtue. You say that it ...

Hiiii Rebel! Okay, I am jumping in the middle (SORRY) and I am unsurprisingly completely lost, haha. This is my fault and I apologize. I am intrigued though... this sci ...

Hello again! :) Okay... so just some thoughts as I read through it really quick! Okay, so this is a bigggg cast and I think I am slightly overwhelmed right ...