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Teehee, I used to love it when my teachers would assign us these sorts of stories. Actually, one of those stories was the thing that started me with creative writing ...

Hey Smexay! Right now, this story needs some direction! Yeah, we're sad that she's sad and writing letters to her dad who has been eight years old, etc. But what ...

Ooooh! I actually really liked this! It's seriously one of my favorite poems on YWS... and that's saying A LOT. *likes* Okay, so now that that's done, there were only ...

Hey Ima! So, this was a kind of dry essay, considering the topic! I don't know... I've possibly read too many first-hand accounts on this to make any brief history ...

Hey Kineta! :D Neat poem! I'm kind of a sucker for the colors too... not very good for the traditional publishing industry, but this isn't geared to be published, I ...

Hey Mary! The best way you can get extra reviews is giving reviews. People will generally avoid works that are bumped, just so you know. ;) Anyway! I thought your ...

Hey observer! :D First of all, you really need to check for silly typos and such! I recommend writing in something like Microsoft Word, which will underline a word red ...

Hey Jigs! I read chapter 2 and I'm still not quite sure what's happening. It's very disjointed! You ended with Maharaj. It just seems strange. As far as the mother ...

Hey Jigsaw! Your other piece looked lonely, but when I looked at it, I realized I had noooo idea what was happening. So it goes! I'd figure I would look ...

Hey Barrett! Comedy is more than just exaggeration... it's also about timing! Right now, this piece is all about exaggeration, but you're ignoring the crucial piece of timing! A couple ...

Hey Demetri! This story is a little bit weird! The sounds "Ahahaha-ahaughhaughhaughaha-AHAHAHA" and "Oh, Charlie, Oh Charlie, OhCharlieOhCharlieOh…Chaaaarrrllliiieeee" make it sound quite humorous,

Hey Kammara! :D First of all, a couple of typos! If your cruel and selfish, just for you to please,

Hey Makar! This has all the elements of an assigned poetry review, which I am supposing it is! And this is something of a good thing because I bet this ...

Hey bhoutris! :D This sounds very much like the beginning of a scary video game with lots of zombie werewolves and such! I probably wouldn't play it, but I'm not ...

Hey Emma Miller! So, this seems more like a grocery list of things that you enjoy from someone. Which is good, for a start, but you're definitely going to want ...