Young Writers Society

OMG. A story featuring a sociopathic butterfly murderess? XD Like... is it even possible for a butterfly to murder? Do they have any way to kill each other? That part ...

Oy, this reminds me of something I could have written when I was reeling with post partum depression... like, logically, I know that infancy eventually ends and things get better ...

Hello! :) the water leaked through the floorboards, you can't convince me i'm lying this time. knee deep in water, you threw a dishcloth at me, screamed that i should ...

Ahhhhhh. I love this poem. It's awesome. I love the visceral image of eating through the banana's flesh, as if to personify the banana, so the whole thing seems like ...

Oh my goodness! When I read this, I was like, "HMMM. This looks like this is a poem that one would find in a novel." Only for me to glance ...

Hiiiiiiiii! I'm here to review. And, since I'm not mentioned in the poem, that means I'm an unbiased source that you can trust... maybe? I dunno. XD In any case, ...

Hi! It's me again, here to look at your story that does not involve chickens. XD Okay... I admit, this family is completely messed up. Princess Valerie is like, "I ...

I cannot express how awesome this story is. It is amazing. Well written and so original. I love it! The first couple of lines got me hooked. I looooove swans. ...

Hi! A quick suggestion... if my journey on this path leads to losing you, then this path is not my path; What if you delete these lines? When you're making ...

Hiiii. In all her bent-up, obnoxious glory. This really isn't very descriptive. How are you glorious? All these adjectives that you are throwing out tell you vaguely what is happening, ...

Awwww, I like this poem! It uses lots of onomatopoeia and is highly relatable for anyone who wants to get another couple minutes. I also like the rule of three ...

Hi! Okay, I know this wasn't a serious work and you probably don't care about any comments for this. You were probably just testing out the site, haha. HOWEVER. I ...

Hi! Ooooh, I actually like the ambiguity of the poem, lol. There is definitely a sense of pain in this poem... like there's a call of suffering which I like. ...

Hi! Let's just straight to review, shall we? (Just like your story goes straight to the conflict, yay!) Teresa walked through the carnival, the sense of unease clutching at her ...

Awwww, I like all the astronomical references! You start with the moon and then go off to the stars and sun and galaxies... it's quite cosmic in scope, and I ...