Young Writers Society

Hiiiiiii! Okay, so this is now only six years old, lol. But I had to check it after you pointed it out. ^^ Anyway, this is also cool (and rough, ...

First of all: I AM SO SORRY. Like, you probably (happily) forgot about this poem's existence. Or maybe you didn't. But... here we both are. Both middle-aged people reminiscing about ...

After seeing how hard you worked on this for Camp Nano... you know I couldn't resist reading it! :) (Also, any story which has James... I MEAN, Jhemes... is an ...

Hiiiiiiiii! I know, you thought I had disappeared off the face of the earth for a while, lol. But I am back! Just... like... with an infant in my lap ...

Hi again! Okay, so Caleb is gearing to be my favorite character so far, lol. Val might think he is an idiot, but like... really, he is the best. He ...

Hiiiiiii again! I did promise I would leave a slightly better review on chapter 1, didn't I? XD Okay, so I totally stalked your Camp Nano thread and I really ...

Hiiiiiiiiii! Okay, so first I read the first chapter first (I didn't realize that there was a prologue at first, whoops!) and then I went back, realized that there was ...

Okay but... goofiness is a nice quality occasionally, but rarely we want to be thought of as merely goofy. We want to be thought of as greater than a clown. ...

THE LAST CHAPTER PART. (Before book 2, anyway...) Sunny made a face, but waved goodbye to Robert. She turned to Jasper and said, "I hope you enjoy your adventures here. ...

Sunny frowned. "But… Okay, fine, I know that expecting things to be perfect forever is unreasonable. But I need a happy ending to my quest, at least!" She needs to ...

With Jasper helping, the process of debugging Jessica went much faster, and Sunny's hopes started to rise. If this was a sign of character growth for Jasper, then maybe once ...

Is it review day??? I suppose this means that it's time for me to review!!! Slowly, Jasper's ambassador formed shapes on its front that resolved into a slightly-pixelated face. The ...

Hi! My favorite stanza is the first stanza by far. It admits that romantic love can be wild and sometimes flowing, and the desire to just hold onto the moment ...

Haha, oof, the hidden messages behind this one! Though, I have to say how sarcastic and biting it is. My one question is... this line: You’d never hurt me (You ...

Okay, so for an introduction for your novel, I would make it fairly standard for an introduction. So basically... I would rewrite it completely to follow this format... 1. First ...