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I love the form of this poem. It required me to pause and reminisce times when I have experienced this same thing. It has inspired me to get more creative ...

This is interesting. I imagine a prisoner sitting in a jail waiting for someone to bust him out. Till then, he imagines that all the bad things about jail are ...

I love the line that says- i'd swoop and i'd dive simply being alive. That stuck out to me. You sure do show some talent in this piece. I love ...

Hey hey! I love this poem! My middle name is Jo :) connection! aww how sweeeet...anyways this made me giggle and i hope to read more of your super cool ...

I really liked this poem until you used the f word. That was completely uncalled for. In my opinion using that word ruined your piece. I hate to sound harsh, ...

I don't think saying F the world is appropriate EVER. That's extremely rude. There are many other ways to express how you feel without using derogatory language. Those who are ...

But in fact I only need your strength and support to make it rule This is my favorite line. I love how you tie in that teens could be so ...