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I am sort of new at writing, I didn't know that about dialogue! Also, I didn't really know what to put between the first-person, and the third person, I kind ...

In the second paragraph, I meant that everything was not going to be okay, because the "Liars" had said that. Sorry if that wasn't clear enough....maybe it just sounded better ...

Hello! I really loved this poem! The title of it was perfect! I love how in the end the soldier just wants peace, and for the war to end. This ...

Sorry, just a habit to say that....XD

You are probably right, most poisonous berries are probably not in Beatrice's backyard! XD Poison Ivy would probably be more realistic.

Hey Kim! SnazzyPencil here to give you another review! It's a good thing that you asked the readers for lots of nitpicks in this story, criticism does make you a ...

I guess I could make it longer, maybe more entertaining too, Thanks for the suggestions!

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! It is scary publishing my first! Thanks for the support!

Thanks for the ideas!

Hey, that would make it funnier! Thanks for the Suggestions!

Thanks for the suggestions! I do admit this is my first poem.....

Hi Ruby! This is an AWESOME poem! I especially like how you refer to the moon as a her, and not a him. I mean, who really knows if it's ...

This is a wonderful poem. I love how it ends, with "For all the wealth it had brought to me." It sort of reminds me a little kid, who is ...

This is a hilarious poem. I really enjoyed reading it! It really reminds of Shel Silverstein's poems, and I am a huge fan of those!! Keep Writing!!