Snazzy

Thanks so much for the like and review! I do admit I was having a hard time with my punctuation on this one. Thanks again for the review! Congrats on ...

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I loved this poem! Very good job describing it! "The branches dip and sway as the flame flashes hot, sparking leaves of heated red and golden rays" I could almost ...

Great Poem! I loved it!!:) Especially this part- "The ones who welcomed me, The ones who showed me You, Father, through their lives. The ones Your light shown through." You ...

Yours too! :)

Hello! Great Job on this! I actually couldn't find anything wrong with this!! Great message! A lost star.... I like it!! Keep writing! -SnazzyPencil

Oh....My.....Gosh. This was amazing, and I really like the idea of this poem!! Although, I am not sure about the name Star, I like it!!!:) "She dreamed and she a ...

Ohhhh, okay! That makes sense. :) Your Welcome! :D

I always like improving my writing! Was does sound better instead of were. Could also sounds better than would! I just realized I used would in this poem five times.......xD ...

I agree, it is a dream, America couldn't really be perfect, no matter how hard I wish it could be. I was actually writing this during school on "Free-Write Friday" ...

Thanks! I never would think of using a personal voice, I could write an answer after each of the questions, based on my own opinion.... Thanks for the help!

Wow. At first when I found this, I first noticed how short this was. Then I noticed how real and beautiful you managed to make it, in only four lines. ...

This is so cute! I keep finding stories I wrote when I was little! I laughed out loud when I read mine too! XD -SnazzyPencil

I...........CAN'T..............STOP....................LAUGHING!!! I do agree that at first I thought the cat had the medical condition, until you said the medical condition included having to use has

Oh. I can't believe I didn't see that..........*bangs head on wall* Sorry about that....XD