Snazzy

Oh, I see what you mean! Thanks for the review! :D

Oh yeah - I didn't even realize I left the "I" out of that first stanza! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Oh, true! I understand that (with my limited experience of like 4 weeks with LMS XD). And yeah, definitely improvement! :) I always used to end mine with my characters ...

No problem! :3 Oh okay - yeah, I think that if you just smooth that aspect of her personality out, that would be totally fine. (I like Mia, by the ...

Of course! I've been writing since 6th grade and I am still learning things and have a LOT of improvement to make! You used colors, yes, but generic ones like ...

Thanks for reading!

I was trying to go along the lines of "messing with the past is bad" and "leaving the past in the past" kind of thing, because sometimes, although we think ...

Do you have any tips or a review on how this could be better? I'd love to improve! :)

Thanks for the review, Nikayla! (and you didn't come off as rude at all! :) One of the reasons I wrote this, was because I do feel like a minority. ...

Thanks for the review!

Oh, okay - I can see that! No problem, Maya! :D CCan' wait to read more of your works! -Snazzy

Haha, that's the way to do it! xD

Thanks so much for taking the time to review my work! The block of ice was supppsed to be an ice cube, though I admit that probably was stretching it ...

Oh, okay! That makes sense. No problem! :D

Thanks so much for the review!!! (now, to review for TEAM JOLLY RANCHER :D :D )