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Re: (The long awaited) Forbidden Shadows Chapter 15 Part 2!
Hello! :) GREAT JOB!!! :) I love this! :) I actually thought it WOULD be Hawkscreech. Thank goodness it wasn't. (I probably would've slapped him with my hand again.... :D ...
Dec 9, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows - Chapter fifteen part one - Series finale! Making it long so there will be parts.
Hello! :) You are a VERY suspenseful writer! :D Great job! I love how you ended with the last sentences- "A scream shot into the sky - and into Bluejay's ...
Dec 9, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows - Chapter Fourteen
Hello! :) :D Wonderful, wonderful, just wonderful! :) I couldn't find anything to correct in this, no grammar mistakes, no spelling mistakes, nothing wrong! :D Great job with this! Keep ...
Dec 9, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows - Chapter Thirteen
OH MY GOODNESS!! :D This was VERY unexpected! :) Great job! I only have one little nitpick! :) "Moon instantly knew as soon as she heard this Stormcloud speak of ...
Dec 9, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows Chapter Twelve
Hello :D This is a fabulous chapter!! :) Great job! It looks like all I wanted to say was mentioned by other "reviewers" though. I do understand now why the ...
Dec 9, 2014 -
Re: If Schools Were Cool
Hello! :D So I was in the middle of reading Forbidden Shadows, when I saw this, and, well, I just couldn't pass it up. :) I only have one correction ...
Dec 9, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows - Chapter Ten
Hello! :) (this time I have time for one... :D ) Once again, you have blown my mind. :D I love this, and I couldn't find anything to correct in ...
Dec 9, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows Chapter Nine
No time for hellos!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D HAWKSCREECH!!!!!!!! :) OH MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D :) I was NOT expecting that!! :D I thought ...
Dec 9, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows Chapter Nine
Hello! :) This is turning out to be an AMAZING book! :D I hope you continue writing this! :) At first when I was "making my list of things to ...
Dec 9, 2014 -
Re: Regenerative Sphere
Hello! :) :D I really love this, and I couldn't really find anything to correct! :) "Do not fear for dear old Mother Earth. Ere she'll surely blossom with new ...
Dec 9, 2014 -
Re: Diary Of A Dead Girl (Edited)
Hello! :) :D This seems like it will turn into a very interesting book. :) I agree, that I always wondered what characters thought of, or what went through their ...
Dec 9, 2014 -
Re: A Few Forgotten Letters
Hello! :D :) I couldn't find anything wrong with this!! :) Except, maybe you could write more, or...now bare with me here :D ....you could write a series of forgotten ...
Dec 8, 2014 -
Re: Wolves and Demons- Chapter 1: The First Battle
Hello! :D :) :D :) I LOVE this! :D It could turn into a FABULOUS book, or series even... :D I only have one correction that I could find, (besides ...
Dec 8, 2014 -
Re: Any ideas?
I am sure that what ever you get for her, she would like. I mean, you are best friends! :D Anyway, so I see that she likes Pokémon, SpongeBob, surprises ...
Dec 4, 2014 -
Re: Night Smile
I LOVE THIS. :D It's awesome, and I can't really find anything to really correct in this. Normally, I would with some of the words being capitalized, but it makes ...
Dec 2, 2014