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  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: The Man Who Lives in a Can

    Hello! :D *laughs hysterically* "Hang on a minute.." *laughs again* Okay. :D Now that that is over with, I must review this. :) This is hilarious! :) First of all, ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Eden

    Hello! :D This is simply put, beautiful. :D Sometimes poems are so long, that you read them, and you don't really get the meaning as much as a shorter, meaningful ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: O Holy Night

    Hello! :) :D I absolutely LOVE how you wrote this poem, and the reason behind it too. :) Jesus truly IS the reason for the season. :D I couldn't really ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Mythical Woodland- Prologue

    Hello! :D :) This is a great start to a book! :D As soon as I read the first paragraph, I was already thinking- Percy Jackson, Percy Jackson, PERCY JACKSONNNNNNN! ...

    Dec 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: School Frustrations.

    Hello! :D I like this! :) Very funny, it seems like this is all that happens in my class every day... :D I only have one little nitpick. I think ...

    Dec 12, 2014
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Shades of White part 2

    Hello! :D This is wonderful! :) Sad, but wonderful!! :D :) I see the things krazywriter had to say, and I see that you have corrected them well! :) Great ...

    Dec 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Escaping Home: Chapter Two

    Hello! :D OH MY GOODNESS!!!! :D I haven't read Chapter one or the prologue but I definitely will now!!! :D This is wonderful! I like the way you explained the ...

    Dec 12, 2014
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Humor Re: The Grinch In Botany

    Hello! :D :) THIS............IS...........AWESOME!!!! :) :D I love it! :) :D I have always wanted to write my OWN lyrics to already hilarious songs!! :D I only found a couple ...

    Dec 12, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, General Re: A Letter To Scrooge

    Hello! :D Since A Christmas Carol is my absolute FAVORITE Christmas book/movie, I really enjoyed this! :) :D When I first started reading it, I was like, "HUMBUG TO YOU ...

    Dec 11, 2014
  • Short Story » Literature, Other Re: Tucked Behind the Ear

    hello! :D :) Great job on this! I know you put the grammar errors were intended, because well, that was what you were told to do! :D Honestly though, I ...

    Dec 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Rainstorms

    Hello! :D As I have said before, I love these types of poem. :D I think they are just AWESOME!! :) This one I loved even better. "So I rush ...

    Dec 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: My Dream

    Hello! :) I know how you feel! :D I hate that about dreaming, you can (normally) never, EVER remember them when you wake up! :) Though sometimes, I do have ...

    Dec 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Our Nation's Problem - A Poem (for the armed forces)

    Hello....again! :D America needs to read this. We DON'T give veterans the thanks they truly deserve. (but those who do, thank you :) ) They saved our lives, and we ...

    Dec 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: If I Had Wings

    Hello! :D I like how your last line didn't rhyme. It's perfectly okay, and it sounds good with this poem! :D I only have one little nitpick- "I would see ...

    Dec 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Where is God When I Need Him?

    Hello! :) I love this. :D Sometimes you feel as if nobody cares, nobody is watching, or knows. But he does, and just like @Jadefox said, it's all part of ...

    Dec 9, 2014


When she transformed into a butterfly, the caterpillars spoke not of her beauty, but of her weirdness. They wanted her to change back into what she always had been. But she had wings.
— Dean Jackson