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Re: The Man Who Lives in a Can
Hello! :D *laughs hysterically* "Hang on a minute.." *laughs again* Okay. :D Now that that is over with, I must review this. :) This is hilarious! :) First of all, ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Eden
Hello! :D This is simply put, beautiful. :D Sometimes poems are so long, that you read them, and you don't really get the meaning as much as a shorter, meaningful ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: O Holy Night
Hello! :) :D I absolutely LOVE how you wrote this poem, and the reason behind it too. :) Jesus truly IS the reason for the season. :D I couldn't really ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Mythical Woodland- Prologue
Hello! :D :) This is a great start to a book! :D As soon as I read the first paragraph, I was already thinking- Percy Jackson, Percy Jackson, PERCY JACKSONNNNNNN! ...
Dec 15, 2014 -
Re: School Frustrations.
Hello! :D I like this! :) Very funny, it seems like this is all that happens in my class every day... :D I only have one little nitpick. I think ...
Dec 12, 2014 -
Re: Shades of White part 2
Hello! :D This is wonderful! :) Sad, but wonderful!! :D :) I see the things krazywriter had to say, and I see that you have corrected them well! :) Great ...
Dec 12, 2014 -
Re: Escaping Home: Chapter Two
Hello! :D OH MY GOODNESS!!!! :D I haven't read Chapter one or the prologue but I definitely will now!!! :D This is wonderful! I like the way you explained the ...
Dec 12, 2014 -
Re: The Grinch In Botany
Hello! :D :) THIS............IS...........AWESOME!!!! :) :D I love it! :) :D I have always wanted to write my OWN lyrics to already hilarious songs!! :D I only found a couple ...
Dec 12, 2014 -
Re: A Letter To Scrooge
Hello! :D Since A Christmas Carol is my absolute FAVORITE Christmas book/movie, I really enjoyed this! :) :D When I first started reading it, I was like, "HUMBUG TO YOU ...
Dec 11, 2014 -
Re: Tucked Behind the Ear
hello! :D :) Great job on this! I know you put the grammar errors were intended, because well, that was what you were told to do! :D Honestly though, I ...
Dec 10, 2014 -
Re: Rainstorms
Hello! :D As I have said before, I love these types of poem. :D I think they are just AWESOME!! :) This one I loved even better. "So I rush ...
Dec 9, 2014 -
Re: My Dream
Hello! :) I know how you feel! :D I hate that about dreaming, you can (normally) never, EVER remember them when you wake up! :) Though sometimes, I do have ...
Dec 9, 2014 -
Re: Our Nation's Problem - A Poem (for the armed forces)
Hello....again! :D America needs to read this. We DON'T give veterans the thanks they truly deserve. (but those who do, thank you :) ) They saved our lives, and we ...
Dec 9, 2014 -
Re: If I Had Wings
Hello! :D I like how your last line didn't rhyme. It's perfectly okay, and it sounds good with this poem! :D I only have one little nitpick- "I would see ...
Dec 9, 2014 -
Re: Where is God When I Need Him?
Hello! :) I love this. :D Sometimes you feel as if nobody cares, nobody is watching, or knows. But he does, and just like @Jadefox said, it's all part of ...
Dec 9, 2014
